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DrWhoFan611 [2016-09-22 00:13:39 +0000 UTC]

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It's nice to see that your trying things out, and are constantly asking for feedback as your carefully plan the series. Its nice to see that you like to think outside the box sometimes and try something new, like how you use your style and shade it.

This time, you seem to be trying a more... comic book feel. I honestly don't have any better words for it, but it looks nice, it has a more comedic feel to it, but isn't as cute as your original style.

Judging by your Silly Lyra series, you seem to mainly aim for funny and cute. While this art style still looks a LITTLE cute, it basically weighs out the more comedic feel over the cute, getting rid of the blend I know and love.

Now I'm not saying its completely bad and is not a good idea, for I can simply get use to new things. However. new can appeal to me immediately, like your shady-style you do on some of those arts.

But then again, I enjoyed the shady-style on a wallpaper level, and wouldn't encourage using it for comics. There's an art style that's good, and there's an art style that fits. And in my opinion, I feel that your regular cartoony-cute usual might fit the more cute and comedic anthropomorphic high school series...

Wait... HIGH SCHOOL! Of course! Now that I think about it, that style might fit for a more school sitting. I was originally thinking about light slice-of-life stuff, and while high school does technically fit under that category, I think there's a slightly different colour to it.

Okay, upon a second look, I'm starting to get some second thoughts. The background looks a little bit like a children's book, while the art style you used for the character has a more... dang it, still the same feel from before.

You know what? I like it. While I'll miss seeing your characters in their cuter art style, I might actually enjoy this one and, maybe, might think its better. Feel free to test this out some more by making a few more drawings with that animation, I wanna see rather or not I'll fall in love if you can make it the cutest you can make it!


-All My Best,
Doug_Critques

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Kyoshyu [2016-10-02 17:12:43 +0000 UTC]

Nuuuu, you can never have LESS books!

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Tearahk [2016-09-22 08:27:45 +0000 UTC]

That's not good. Comics are awesome O:

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Backjack-Kitsune [2016-09-22 00:19:33 +0000 UTC]

puppy founds some good reads hopefully

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Teryaki [2016-09-22 00:06:56 +0000 UTC]

Aww, looks like the pup is just barely containing a huge grin and squee.

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