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first of probably many to come, learning how to colour.lines by the talented
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Element-d [2011-12-23 15:16:29 +0000 UTC]
This is some great work, so going on my table as a wallpaper!! Nice work!
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rosefairy007 [2008-10-26 16:05:54 +0000 UTC]
loooooooooooooooooove it the colour and the datail and omg the lay-out with the cool pose's nice very very nice love it
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Kitty-Cat-Angel [2008-09-21 09:54:18 +0000 UTC]
Nice work! Love the shading on Superman's cape.
My suggestion is that the blue you used on Superman could be a little less saturated, and the ambient light could have been more intense, just so that he doesn't seem as dark.
Also, not so sure on the background colour choice, I think a less conventional colour could have done more for the picture, but perhaps that's just me.
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doriannedutrieux In reply to Kitty-Cat-Angel [2008-11-04 18:11:15 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much for the feedback *hugs*
btw, I 'm roadtripping down for umicon
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doriannedutrieux In reply to Kitty-Cat-Angel [2008-11-04 22:38:47 +0000 UTC]
yeah, myself, my bro, wraithbaby and Dawid are gonna cram into my little Fiat and drive for it.
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Kitty-Cat-Angel In reply to doriannedutrieux [2008-11-05 07:24:26 +0000 UTC]
Oh poo! LOL XD Where are you guys staying?
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doriannedutrieux In reply to Kitty-Cat-Angel [2008-11-05 11:05:24 +0000 UTC]
umm... dunno yet, lol. we're behaving like hippy freaks
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Kitty-Cat-Angel In reply to doriannedutrieux [2008-11-05 12:26:25 +0000 UTC]
Shame! Though there's tons of B&B's in the area, only thing is it's an upmarket area so they may be a tad expensive, but there are TONS!!!
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doriannedutrieux In reply to Kitty-Cat-Angel [2008-11-05 18:29:38 +0000 UTC]
don't get me wrong, we like behaving like hippy freaks
we'll sort it out, I'm sure
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ZeroExile [2008-08-26 21:16:23 +0000 UTC]
Some very nice coloring work there
Loving that batarang!
Hmm, as for advice, I would give the flat colours a bit more depth and texture. For example that moon could use some craters and some texture
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doriannedutrieux In reply to ZeroExile [2008-08-26 21:23:22 +0000 UTC]
thanx, I'll take it in too
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TheBeardlyBen [2008-08-26 18:37:03 +0000 UTC]
Schweet! I like!
Only crit: how 'bout a shiny aurora around the moon and some ripples on the water?
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doriannedutrieux In reply to TheBeardlyBen [2008-08-26 19:08:51 +0000 UTC]
thanx, and okidoki
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doriannedutrieux In reply to TheBeardlyBen [2008-08-26 19:43:34 +0000 UTC]
btw, you beem getting any of my messages on msn?
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TheBeardlyBen In reply to doriannedutrieux [2008-08-28 11:06:09 +0000 UTC]
uhhh... No, I haven't been very active as of late (checking it now)
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ErdwolfTVL [2008-08-26 18:12:36 +0000 UTC]
Ah! The thingy you spoke about... Very well done!
I'll be your slobbering fanboy today
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doriannedutrieux In reply to ErdwolfTVL [2008-08-26 19:09:48 +0000 UTC]
lol, ok. you know I needed that.
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doriannedutrieux In reply to ZurdoM [2008-08-26 19:12:15 +0000 UTC]
thank you, for both the kind words and the permission.
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wraithbaby [2008-08-26 06:53:24 +0000 UTC]
Hmm I'm not quite sure what to say. I'm thinking the reflective lighting on SM is a bit strong. And perhaps the back ground appears too light or a tad dull. other then that I think you did a good job. I'm really liking BM's shiny clothing
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doriannedutrieux In reply to wraithbaby [2008-08-26 09:29:50 +0000 UTC]
thanx, I agree with it all.
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RABies-RABbit [2008-08-25 17:51:20 +0000 UTC]
Critique, eh? I'm guessing that's water in the lower left part. You didn't put in enough detail. But other than that, it's awesome. And I would perhaps suggest adding some clouds.
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doriannedutrieux In reply to RABies-RABbit [2008-08-25 19:21:42 +0000 UTC]
allrighty, I'll take that in duringthe next one,
thanx for the fave....I'm out of candy
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doriannedutrieux In reply to RABies-RABbit [2008-08-25 21:18:49 +0000 UTC]
no, none....you got any?
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ducttapequeen [2008-08-25 17:48:12 +0000 UTC]
i think it looks fantastic. the only thing throwing me off a little (very little) is the highlight on supermans upper chest. but, not being a master critique artist, i cant figure out why. i think it might just be that not enough of the blue comes through, making the light too yellow, but again, that could just be me. but its an amazing coloring job. it looks very professional. very nice :3
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doriannedutrieux In reply to ducttapequeen [2008-08-25 19:18:57 +0000 UTC]
thanx girl, that something I need to work on, my light, it's colour and where I decide to make it bright. spot on
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ducttapequeen In reply to doriannedutrieux [2008-08-25 21:25:07 +0000 UTC]
like i said, its still an awesome coloring job! kudos
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