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Published: 2005-12-30 19:07:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 52; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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yay, finally an action pose that i didn't totally screw up!tell me what can be improved now i still can change it!
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Blanke [2006-06-09 11:30:58 +0000 UTC]
Oooh, I'd love to see this one finished; I haven't seen any action shots from your style before. I really like that expression, how she's fighting and possibly struggling, but still has that innocence about her. I'll ease up on the critique, because I see that this is rather old now, and you probably notice a few things yourself. If you do decide to finish this (and I'll look forward to it if you do
), I'd recommend making her arms a bit thicker and longer, and putting more foreshortening on the leg thats raised up.
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dorieke In reply to Blanke [2006-06-09 19:56:44 +0000 UTC]
haha, i dont think im gonna finish this anymore...
thanks anyways!!!
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Blanke In reply to dorieke [2006-06-09 22:21:12 +0000 UTC]
"If" was the operative word there... But I know how it goes. For growing artists, what's treasure one month can become trash the next month in comparison. (Did that come out right?)
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