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Published: 2008-07-26 00:38:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 93; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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I move to the left,You move to the right.
I say run,
You say fight.
And war ensues between you and me.
The room I seclude us in is our battleground.
Why can't you leave and let me be?
You don't want me to enjoy what peace I've found!
When my world is a cacophony of tragedy,
You become my soothing reassurance.
When tranquility reigns over like a sweet remedy,
You become my bone breaking dance.
And Fate, in his glory, smiles at our calamity,
He will keep us together forever and a day.
Since we took our first breath and, one day, our last as one entity,
From each other we can never, ever stray.
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Comments: 7
KimmikoTakeda [2008-07-26 02:32:00 +0000 UTC]
Aw, forever to find the 'one' to spend enternity with that is my dream, your poem renews my hope in that dream, arigatou.
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DorkMate In reply to KimmikoTakeda [2008-07-26 02:52:21 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you can find hope through the poem. Though I feel compelled to admit that that wasn't exactly what my poem was about, I have no problem with any interpretation as long as it means something to the reader.
So thank you, and thank you for the fav!
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Spectrum-Design [2008-07-26 01:18:04 +0000 UTC]
nice job. very good. i enjoyed it very much.
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Spectrum-Design In reply to DorkMate [2008-07-26 01:19:24 +0000 UTC]
no problem, you're really good.
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DorkMate In reply to Spectrum-Design [2008-07-26 01:22:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the fav!
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