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Dormin-DIM β€” PDM Mission 3: part 11 and 12

Published: 2011-09-10 02:10:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 3827; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 28
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Description It's only the preview but I dunno if i will be here tomorrow and after tomorrow.. so here is a little bonus to make you wait!

Sorry >w
Sorry for the size but without a scanner i can only take photos...

Mission 3: enter the ice cavern with CrΓ©puscule and Tyr. Hope I did it well T.T...

Crepuscule & Tyr are mine and belong to merchant guild.

Rank Raichu.

Application about team lost silver: [link]

Page 1 & 2: ==> [link]
Page 3 & 4: ==> [link]
Page 5 & 6: ==> [link]
Page 7 & 8: [link]
Page 9 & 10: ==>
Page 11 & 12: You're watching it^^
Page 13 & 14: ==> [link]
Page 15 & 16: ==> [link]
Page 17 & 18: ==> [link]
Page 19 & 20: ==> [link]
Page 21 & 22: ==> [link]
Page 23 & 24: ==> [link]
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Comments: 16

Jiyuria [2011-09-10 05:25:21 +0000 UTC]

It looks lovely! But Ashuras....do you have anybody to spell check your sentences for you? I know it's hard since English isn't your first language. I could help if you want. (I still feel bad for not being too overly helpful.) Or do you have it?

I love how she seems oblivious to running into Coliche....

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Dormin-DIM In reply to Jiyuria [2011-09-10 05:27:15 +0000 UTC]

well i don't saddly? So feel free to correct me, i really would appreciate this help >w
Hehe I do too. I only regrets it was so short.

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Jiyuria In reply to Dormin-DIM [2011-09-10 05:29:10 +0000 UTC]

Alrighty, I'm glad you said I could! Since if it's hard to read you might lose but you're so talented!


It added to comedic effect.

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Dormin-DIM In reply to Jiyuria [2011-09-10 05:32:08 +0000 UTC]

Yep, that's what freaks me a little.^^'

So feel free =3 and thank you so much >wπŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Jiyuria In reply to Dormin-DIM [2011-09-10 06:41:41 +0000 UTC]

I sent you a very long note, I'm so sorry, you did a good job so it was hard to explain where the typos were.

There you go! Wish you the best of luck!

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Worldgoesround4all [2011-09-10 03:08:27 +0000 UTC]

ouch that's gotta hurt >.o

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M-a-y-a-l [2011-09-10 02:50:54 +0000 UTC]

STRIKE!!!

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pollydragon [2011-09-10 02:33:57 +0000 UTC]

oh that well hurt a bet

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Dormin-DIM In reply to pollydragon [2011-09-10 02:34:19 +0000 UTC]

huh?

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pollydragon In reply to Dormin-DIM [2011-09-10 02:36:19 +0000 UTC]

u know they crash

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sapphire3690 [2011-09-10 02:23:33 +0000 UTC]

XD Poor Coliche

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Dormin-DIM In reply to sapphire3690 [2011-09-10 02:34:05 +0000 UTC]

gnihihihi

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sapphire3690 In reply to Dormin-DIM [2011-09-10 02:43:08 +0000 UTC]

Kehehehe

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TyphlosionsKingdom [2011-09-10 02:22:59 +0000 UTC]

now if a typhlosion were to do that there would be nuttin but a roasted skid mark left!

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Dormin-DIM In reply to TyphlosionsKingdom [2011-09-10 02:33:56 +0000 UTC]

Because Typhlosions are just AWSOME!

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TyphlosionsKingdom In reply to Dormin-DIM [2011-09-10 07:28:50 +0000 UTC]

epic god like awesome!!!!!

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