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Published: 2016-06-18 18:34:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 1466; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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Maichaa [2016-12-23 21:55:37 +0000 UTC]
Hi,I have youtube channel, can I use your artwork for my video edit? I will surely give you credit
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DosadiVH In reply to Maichaa [2016-12-23 22:45:36 +0000 UTC]
Hi! I've a youtube channel too, where I already made a video of this comic. You can find the link in the description. But thank you anyway for the offer, I'm glad, but I need to say no.
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Baliah In reply to DosadiVH [2016-06-20 15:09:20 +0000 UTC]
If only this would happen in the show😅
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SunnyChann [2016-06-19 21:56:32 +0000 UTC]
Actually I like the story, but ... the things really passed fast. I mean the story was good, but I think you should add more scenes - to be more romantic, to be more in "the story" (If you understand what I am talking about). And also you could coloured them, but that's not problem. So ... I hope next time you will improve your skills and story will be better! Good luck next time!
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DosadiVH In reply to SunnyChann [2016-06-20 08:33:55 +0000 UTC]
Hi! Thank you very much for your critique. It helps me a lot
I know it is out of the Miraculous universe. My goal was to draw a bit of parody and humor. It was planned to be only for one person, so I put not much effort in being correct with the story and the drawing. But I was convinced to put it online. Anyway, you see tottally right, that I'm terrible with romantic stories XD It's not my genre, I prefer action.
I'm sorry to tell that the following stories were made together with this, so I can't build in your insights. But I guess it's better not to put them online XD
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SunnyChann In reply to DosadiVH [2016-06-20 17:50:11 +0000 UTC]
Ohh, there is no problem that you are good or bad at romantic stories and you prefer action than romatic. XD (I'm not good too, so you are not alone XD XD) You actually don't need to conform with my or somebody else fave genre. I really understand you for your goal with this comic, but next time it will be better, I believe in you and your talent! And I'm happy that I helped you with my comment! *hug* (too much hugs, I'm sorry, but I love to hug someone to support him )!! Looking forward for your next draw about everything for Miraculous Ladybug!
And please - you can upload what do you want!
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DosadiVH In reply to SunnyChann [2016-06-20 18:05:20 +0000 UTC]
Your enthusiasm is inspiring! Thank you for your hugs
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SunnyChann In reply to DosadiVH [2016-06-20 20:55:48 +0000 UTC]
You are welcome, my friend!
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MineWonderland [2016-06-19 20:48:16 +0000 UTC]
this was a bit too fast paced... Sorry to say this, but it was. Everything was a bit too convinient and happened to fast. Sadly, the art style isn't really saving it.
Really sorry to say this, but its my honest opinion.
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DosadiVH In reply to MineWonderland [2016-06-20 09:08:27 +0000 UTC]
It's a really nice that you can tell your honest opinion. But it hurt my feelings anyway.
I want to tell you at first about the background of the story: it was planned to be only for one person, but I was convinced to put it online. The story was made for her and my taste. I know the story isn't romantic, too much deus ex machina and I wanted to cut it short. So I understand, that you didn't like it and you are free to like or dislike it.
What makes me feel bad, that you devalue my art style too. I did not put all my effort in it, but it is still my art style. I started drawing 9 years ago and I did put many hard time and practice to be able to learn to draw from the very basic. So you make me feel that all my effort for passion of drawing worth nothing.
So I want to ask you one thing: please, think it through when you write a negative comment that how you would feel to get it and what will you gain from it. The result of this comment was that I felt bad.
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MineWonderland In reply to DosadiVH [2016-06-20 09:27:27 +0000 UTC]
You're free to do the same, you know? I do admit, i would love to have more comments and maybe get pointers on what to do better, so feel free to visit my gallery and point out what could be made better, because admitted, my art ain't better.
And well, do feel sorry for being brutally honest, but it still is criticism to maybe help you improve. I do know a little how hard it can be to hear something like this, but I do not mean bad, even though my words are harsh.
Am sorry if it came over harsher than I myself intended and I do hope it at least sorta helps you improving your style and maybe make something better.
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DosadiVH In reply to MineWonderland [2016-06-20 10:46:18 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for your kind answer
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MineWonderland In reply to DosadiVH [2016-06-20 10:59:11 +0000 UTC]
Really not mean to insult, just trying to help you improve.
And again, feel free to bash my shit xD
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