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Published: 2005-04-02 13:53:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 1262; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 60
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Description Finally, I drew something that didn't completely suck. I'm actually fond of this one. But don't be fooled, it took me a lot of hours and a lot of "erasing" to get it to look good. Still, just because I'm fond of it, doesn't mean you should be nice when commenting. I always appreciate constructive criticism :3 This is concept art for me and Gravekeeper's RPG-in-the-planning, code-named "The Big Lesbian and Kitsune Fest" (BLKF for short) primarily due to our particular cast of characters. That being said, I'm just testing out outfits/armor, and this may not reflect what the characters will look like in the end. On the left we have my own character, which I'll refer to as Doval for now. He strives to follow in his dead father's footsteps as a knight, but people from his world don't take kindly to furries or half-breeds, so he doesn't really have much of a chance at being formally knighted. He's wearing a black long-sleeve shirt with an aketon over it, with a simple breastplate and pauldrons. He's not really too wealthy. FFT fans may recognize a lot of similarity to the Squire job design ^^ To his right we have tears85's character, which I designed mainly from scratch. She too is a half-kitsune, but unlike Doval, she has two tails, and she's a thief. Hope ya like, Tears, Gravekeeper ^^
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Comments: 16

Nenktikobe [2007-01-12 02:33:50 +0000 UTC]

Kawaii! <3
Remind me to slap you in college - and get you to teach me how to draw human anathomy.
I are so suck-ish in that subject when it comes to drawing. >.<
Over all I like the picture - especialy Doval's spiky hair. ^^
Dang, Armando... It's been... A year and- well, almost two years since you've uploaded /anything/. XD

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shinjukudemon [2006-06-08 06:24:50 +0000 UTC]

hmm o.o though I dunno if I should critique,it's cool,the whole concept and stuffisus :3

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Maki-Ubermach [2005-05-25 00:21:11 +0000 UTC]

ee i think this is the best pic in your gallery and i like the expressions, theyr emuch deeper than some of your other pics so i think its a big improvement. i would just define the socket between the arm and the ribcage (on the girls body) a lil more at least on the under arm and i think your good to go. good job!
<3
maki

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tahliadenae [2005-04-09 13:13:38 +0000 UTC]

Wow, you weren't kidding... you really did upload xD

I LOVE IT. Jeez, you could've told me you'd gotten this good I love the liney-technique. The anatomy just kicks soooo much ass *_*

BLKF, huh? I WANT IN! j/k j/k

I can't wait to see more

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Kerowyn-Chan [2005-04-04 21:50:33 +0000 UTC]

O.O omg army!! holy crappers!!! i really like that one!! *glances at the furry piccy you drew of my samurai cat, then the ones gravekeeper did* oh yush.. i remember that art now... do i still get to be in it? lol

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Uty-Bacalaito [2005-04-03 19:28:28 +0000 UTC]

Diache.... hace un buen tiempo q no pones nada... I so love this one

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Hyzaku-of-NYAA [2005-04-03 08:32:34 +0000 UTC]

I love the character designs, they seem very appropriate given the descriptions you gave for each of them. I don't see this kind of shading/filling very much, but I like how it turned out here. It gives the pic a very distinctive look. Despite the actual sketchy of the lines, the details show through nicely and give an almost sharpening effect to the lightly shaded areas. I also like that how, again, despite the sketchyness the main outlines and the lines used for the details standout from the shading to give a clear image of the characters.

A very nice job in my opinion.

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evildeadz [2005-04-02 23:35:27 +0000 UTC]

Cool, dude! It looks like you worked on it. I really enjoy the blues in this. Doval rocks my socks for sure! I think somethingk is weird with his thumbs up hand though. Kinda big? Maybe not.

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gravekeeper [2005-04-02 23:30:13 +0000 UTC]

*Rubs eyes in dispelief*
No... it isn't an April Fool's joke... DOVAL HAS TEH UPD4TED OMGF!!!111!one!

Finally, man... *Beats you up with a tire iron* It's been too long since you last posted. ^ ^ See? I told you that if you stopped whining so much you'd be free to draw to your heart's content! This be good shiz, so stop belittling yourself. *Re: beats with a tire iron* And don't worry about your character's changes- he's just a growing boy~!

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tears85 [2005-04-02 20:02:12 +0000 UTC]

Very non-objective comment coming up XD Me likes! Lots! Both look cute :3 Really like the faces and eyes :3 One thing tho.. You must DRAW MORE OFTEN! Seriously ^^ Don't deny people your arts ^^

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jonfoxart [2005-04-02 19:56:43 +0000 UTC]

Awesome work, you are really good at drawing anime!!!

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doval In reply to jonfoxart [2005-04-02 20:29:27 +0000 UTC]

That's a subject of opinion...it took me 5 hours to get that done, and a LOT of erasing...I'm not good, I just tried for hours until it looked decent

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Umeko [2005-04-02 17:41:45 +0000 UTC]

weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Hmmm, it looks little too sketchy maybeis, ink it and color it! Umi wants to see this piece done
Hmm Tears looks little more like a bunnie then a fox.

Finish this piece now bro

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vilhelmina [2005-04-02 13:58:52 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, this is nice. ^^ It's got a bit of a sketchy feeling, but it's still nice. You definately have improved since you last posted anything here. ^^ I'm especially fond of the character to the left here, his expression is very well done; and not only the facial expression but the whole body language as well. As for the other character, her head looks a little flat (as if she misses part of her back head.. if that's a word. I hope you get what I refer to, though), but her anatomy other than that is very nicely pulled off Good work!

Both of their outfits are rocking, too. I'd love to see this in colour, Army

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doval In reply to vilhelmina [2005-04-02 14:11:33 +0000 UTC]

Color? It's a shame I suck at CGing far more than I do at drawing XD But I can always try ^^ I have to, anyways, it's one of my goals in life and stuff o_o Her face looks flat? I think it's because there's a line that came out a bit dark that's meant to be part of her hair, coming down behind her eye, but it actually looks like it's part of the same line that makes up her jaw bone. I'll be sure to fix that if and when I "ink" this. I'm proud of their hands, actually XD I always suck at hands, but after a lot of erasing, I got them to look natural, I think I'm glad you like my character. I need to refine his hair a bit more though, so that it looks a bit more real. I also need to [i]define[/i] Suzanne's hair some. When I started out I really had no idea what to do with her, that's why her hair isn't as defined as my character's. It's a shame I ran out of space to show Suzanne's dirk in her left hand I actually re-did her outfit completely after I had already done a lot of the shading with crosshatching, too XD; At first she had a skin-tight suit going from her top all the way down, and some wristbands, with a dirk tucked away under the wristand of the arm that's raised (that's the whole reason for the pose, really) but then I decided she was looking too much like a Playboy bunny and not really all that RPGish or cool, so I gave her a top, some jeans, and that nifty belt, and changed her wristbands for gloves :3 Well, enough ranting Thanks for the comment <3

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vilhelmina In reply to doval [2005-04-14 09:18:26 +0000 UTC]

Good... Colour = nice.
I think that was a good idea, this outfit is really RPG-like and such.
And you're welcome

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