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Alternate Idea:The Sponsors like to keep a tight control on who is capable of using magic, they transform those with a spar of talent into Monster-girls. they run amok slightly freaked-out then get "cured" (also loosing their spark) by a select few chosen girls who have trouble utilizing their sparks without props.
At least that is how it has been until THIS generation, instead of "curing" it is outright culling.
The Main TG character has basically the same background as before (Superhero Parents-will use Whateley concepts for ease of explanation: Father is a PK Brick type-Mother former Magical Girl who got away from her crutch and is a Wiz/Martial Arts type little Bro(sis?) is an Early Expression PK super similar to the dad)
For some reason the boy gets transferred to a Japanese school, something very odd as he isn't even in the student exchange program.
He and the other 4 girls (using the four elements) who are children of the former generation are marked not for being magical girls but for being monster-fied and culled.
Their transformations react to surges in magic (they have humans forms they can hold to lay low)
They have to unite to stay alive vs the Magical Girls of Love and peace!
Fire: (Succubus) The TG'd member she is also the only Western type Monster
Metal: (Tengu-and Ghost) Metal Feathers Killed early but is kept around as her Soul crystal is undamaged-possible rez later on? Idea two and the more likely is the fact that she had a twin sister who also gets infects but might end up another type.
Water: Yuki Onna
Wood: Harionaga (Barbed hair girl)
Earth: Yamanba (motherly type) surprisingly intellectual (Meganeko-Oppai-messy hair)
Mostly just a rough concept.
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Comments: 51
DPRagan In reply to ??? [2011-10-25 05:10:14 +0000 UTC]
One of the reasons I haven't jumped into it. that and I don't know enough Japanese.
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Xython In reply to DPRagan [2011-10-25 06:00:14 +0000 UTC]
I'd back off the Japanese elements then. It makes just as much sense without them.
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DPRagan In reply to Xython [2011-10-25 07:16:10 +0000 UTC]
Maybe I should go with the first runner-up then?
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Xython In reply to DPRagan [2011-10-25 16:56:38 +0000 UTC]
Not saying that, just saying that you have a tendency to throw a little more in than you need to. That's why I was suggesting doing small 2-3 page sequences to wet your whistle and get used to the format.
For example, what's Alexa up to? We haven't heard about Soap Story in a very, very long time. How about a series of drawings describing a typical school day?
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DPRagan In reply to DrBender [2011-10-06 13:16:37 +0000 UTC]
Not sure if the ghost tengu will be staying other (as a Ghost) or have a Sister with a different look.
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DPRagan In reply to DrBender [2011-10-06 21:27:26 +0000 UTC]
Sending you some info on some of the concept I may go for twins rather then rez the one girl.
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DPRagan In reply to DrBender [2011-10-07 05:05:45 +0000 UTC]
I think I might go with twins might be spookier that way...although not sure if the twin-sister will be a Tengu as well
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DPRagan In reply to A-Eadie [2011-10-05 13:40:12 +0000 UTC]
Ahh you found it! It was hidden in scraps
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A-Eadie In reply to DPRagan [2011-10-05 16:44:09 +0000 UTC]
Curse your hiding skills! But very nice!
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AmethystNighthut [2011-09-29 04:37:46 +0000 UTC]
Hmmmm... this is rather interesting. Very interesting indeed. ^_^
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DPRagan In reply to AmethystNighthut [2011-09-29 10:21:41 +0000 UTC]
Turns the Magical Girl thing on it's ear even more then it has been in recent Anime.
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Animefan-279 [2011-09-29 01:14:07 +0000 UTC]
Shouldn't the Yuki-Onna's element be ice or snow?
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DPRagan In reply to Animefan-279 [2011-09-29 10:21:08 +0000 UTC]
Using the traditional Chinese Elements.
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Animefan-279 In reply to DPRagan [2011-09-29 16:12:42 +0000 UTC]
But Yuki-Onna are Japanese snow spirits, aren't they?
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DPRagan In reply to Animefan-279 [2011-09-29 20:55:53 +0000 UTC]
Yes, but there is no Ice Element.
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DPRagan In reply to darth603 [2011-09-28 20:50:57 +0000 UTC]
That would be a Fire type and might make a minor appearance, and I already have a Fire-type.
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Levia-the-Dragon [2011-09-28 20:30:23 +0000 UTC]
Interesting setup, though I'm a little shaky on those oriental supernatural creatures...
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DPRagan In reply to Levia-the-Dragon [2011-09-28 20:52:18 +0000 UTC]
Ice Maiden, The Tegu (Raven) in this case is more Harpy, the Mountain "hag" and a Thorn haired girl. and a Succubus
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Levia-the-Dragon In reply to DPRagan [2011-09-29 08:24:53 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh, interesting, the ice-maiden in particular interests me.
So is the succubus's civilian/human form male or female?
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Levia-the-Dragon In reply to DPRagan [2011-09-29 20:36:14 +0000 UTC]
Ah, well that'll take some getting used to then.
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DPRagan In reply to Levia-the-Dragon [2011-09-29 20:56:53 +0000 UTC]
Yeah the old Double Wammy
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Levia-the-Dragon In reply to DPRagan [2011-09-30 08:44:12 +0000 UTC]
And how wil;l he/she end up coping I wonder...
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DPRagan In reply to Levia-the-Dragon [2011-09-30 12:17:23 +0000 UTC]
Depends if she gets the time.
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Levia-the-Dragon In reply to DPRagan [2011-09-30 12:53:22 +0000 UTC]
Ah, a very good point given all that she'll be dealing with.
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DPRagan In reply to Levia-the-Dragon [2011-09-30 13:30:43 +0000 UTC]
I think she might have some,Her mother came over with her and her maternal grandmother is around there as well.
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Levia-the-Dragon In reply to DPRagan [2011-09-30 14:00:37 +0000 UTC]
Ah, well t least she'll have support.
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DPRagan In reply to Levia-the-Dragon [2011-09-30 15:10:03 +0000 UTC]
Yes bras make all of the difference.
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Malt8 [2011-09-28 19:46:46 +0000 UTC]
Interesting concept. I really like it and think you should delve into it more. Could end up being very cool ^ ^. Keep up your awesome work.
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IrateResearchers [2011-09-28 19:33:42 +0000 UTC]
interesting. Will mecha be involved?
possibly as "alternate culling group?"
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DPRagan In reply to IrateResearchers [2011-09-28 19:35:36 +0000 UTC]
Not at this time. Unless it's Hardsuits ala Knight Sabers
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IrateResearchers In reply to DPRagan [2011-09-28 19:43:16 +0000 UTC]
Ah. Because I don't think sponsors would simply let magical girls monopolize the industry...
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IrateResearchers In reply to DPRagan [2011-09-28 20:35:08 +0000 UTC]
true, there is no real-life version to draw from.
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