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DrabRats — Tetsuo contest - submission 2
Published: 2005-05-20 04:07:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 426; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 53
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Here's my second sub for Martegodpopo's "I will color your tetsuo" contest. I like it better than 1 but I'm still not satisfied. The composition got a little screwed up because the original was to big for the scanner and the copier where I'm at, so the pills got cropped - the big one in front was once whole. I suppose I could cut and paste but I don't have much time. Oh well. Also, I didn't have reference for any of it, so the little details are probably all wrong.Related content
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nice, deffinately a step up from the last one, much more readable
Good stuff
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Is it weird that the Rush Limbaugh-esque guy in the back reminds me of Baron Vladimir Harkonnen from Lynch's Dune? Well, he does. And that's a compliment. The line weight variations are great, very helpful for coloring, though they get a little confusing trying to differentiate the bear from the hero. I like it.
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Thanks. I'm pretty happy with it, though I'll now be doing the coloring myself. (sob) Yeah, the line work gets slack in places - I rushed it quite a bit, which is funny considering my problem with the last one was spending TOO MUCh time on it, leaving it overworked.
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Hey! A new one, uh.
The composition is good But I like the 1rst one. Was more like u (talking about art-style).
and I don't why but I think ur pencil work have to be better than ur inking.
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awesome! i like this submission a bit better than the pther one as well, looks good, the back right side is a little confusing, maybe thivker lines between the bear face and claw? but yeah, great piece!
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Thanks. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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