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gwennie-chan [2012-06-24 19:05:27 +0000 UTC]
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Ok, first I love that you combine Twilight, Pinkie Pie, and Derpy together as those aren't an average combination from what I've seen.
Background: This piece is set on a really cool background of realistic clouds that are soft and airy. I find that really cool and well-done as clouds that are realistic can be hard for someponies to do. That being said they don't really fit the classic MLP:FIM type clouds as much, and those might have made this a little better to match the show, but that's just a personal bit.
All ponies: They need to have a little nostril showing which I cannot see. Body positions and dimensions, as well as proportions are above average and pretty well done (with the exception of Derpy's face, see below).
Twilight & Pinkie Pie: Their colors seem a tad lighter than desired on their coats, their tails and manes are fine. Their eyes could use some more defined eyelashes as well as a little iris color for twilight (just a little, not to remove the shocked effect you're going for). Twilight's tail could use a little bit more gravity pulling on it.
Pinkie's Balloons: The balloons are cool, and the realistic translucent and transparent elements make them look like balloons, but their edges seem to be a little bit off, I can't tell exactly what it is, but there's just something about the edges.
Derpy: Having Derpy sleeping up there in the clouds is very cute, but she needs to have a discernible snout. That being said Derpy's face is more rounded, but it still needs a little snout to really cement that Derpy look.
Color Selection: All characters are done pretty much as close to the hues that are in the show and are pretty well done.
Overall: This is a fairly decent work and is certainly above average quality. It's a very summery picture and surely is a good addition to the group galleries it is in.
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Dealfult [2012-06-18 04:41:34 +0000 UTC]
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Pinkies look rather off just hanging there, the ratio of her hips to her torso seems a little weird as is Twilights eyes and horn (But that's just being nit picky)
Over all I think it's a very good drawing and I wish I had half the talent you do although I'm not sure if I've seen this picture before so that's why the rating for originality is lower then is should be.
And lastely this has nothing to do with the picture but a 100 word minimum review is a little excessive, hell, right now I'm just padding it out so I can sumbit
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hero08 [2012-06-22 22:32:49 +0000 UTC]
So good, just fun to look at and catches a real sense of mood
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ZebulonSmiley [2012-06-19 20:27:21 +0000 UTC]
Pinkie in a deep voice: "COME WITH ME IF YOU WANT TO LIVE."
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Delsin07 [2012-06-18 05:23:39 +0000 UTC]
And thus Twilight learned that she didn't like heights. Or Pinkie after she had 3 lines of pure cane extract. Derpy however was oblivious to this and dreamt of the Doctor. (also grats on EQD feature)
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PlatinumKarma [2012-06-18 03:58:40 +0000 UTC]
Pinkie Pie in the skyyyy
I can Dash twice as hiiiigh
Take a look, it's in a book
A reading raiiiinbowww
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BB-K [2012-06-18 02:49:13 +0000 UTC]
UP!
Ooo, there's Derpy sleeping up there! Wow, she sure make tons of cameo appearances in various artworks.
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RiddlerSphinx [2012-06-18 00:00:37 +0000 UTC]
I love the look on Twilight Sparkle's face, LOL
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Pink--Champagne [2012-06-17 22:45:24 +0000 UTC]
Cute. Too bad in real life it would take 5 to 10 thousand balloons to lift the two of them.
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NeatNit In reply to Pink--Champagne [2012-06-17 23:08:13 +0000 UTC]
Ever seen Up?
Sure, there were A TON of balloons there, about 100 times the size of the house itself. But they were lifting A HOUSE. Not only lifting it, but they actually DISCONNECTED IT FROM THE GROUND.
I think Pinkie can make this many balloons work.
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SpikelyWhiplash In reply to Pink--Champagne [2012-06-17 23:06:11 +0000 UTC]
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Pink--Champagne In reply to SpikelyWhiplash [2012-06-17 23:19:52 +0000 UTC]
I guess considering the fact that a pony can fly by barely flapping two tiny little wings in Equestria, this might just work after all.
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GothGuru In reply to Pink--Champagne [2013-12-31 03:24:45 +0000 UTC]
Gary Gygax always said that Pegasuses flew more by magic than with wings.
The balloons are full of magic air.
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Galaxyart [2012-06-17 14:22:56 +0000 UTC]
This is a real nice piece! Their expressions fit perfectly, the colors don't stand out too much and you've even placed a Derpy in the mix! Beautifully done, sir! ^^
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