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Draconaxic — Atlas and Jason
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Published: 2019-02-21 13:04:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 1133; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 0
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This is for a friend who ain’t on D.A, anyways Atlas doesn’t belong to me, he belongs to her. Edit : Haha my dumbself forgot, Atlas is the black haired one, Jason is the taller gingEr haired one.Related content
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THIS LOOKS SO PRETTY WHAT THE HECK? Seriously though, there's been some major improvement. Everything looks so soft and nice.
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This is cute, I really like your color choice and the faces and hair! I do feel like they are a bit too tall, though, but that might just be how the characters or your style is. If that is the case, however, I feel like the one hugging the other one has a bit of an awkward looking neck? And the hands should be a bit more round, and look more like an actual object with a bit more form. The shading is pretty good, but unless the phone is off, I think it'd be another source of light and even if it's not, I feel like the shading is a little random. It would look better if you made a definite source of light and then shaded any object on the side that didn't face the source and on any part where the light would be blocked. Maybe try using real objects and a flashlight or something to test this. Other than that, this is a pretty good piece overall, even though I have no idea which character is which!
If you would like a visual example of what I mean with the shading, I could give you one!
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Hey! Thank you so much for this comment, especially for reminding me about the source of light for shading, sometimes I do accidentally tend to randomly shade ‘round wherever I please. So I should definitely do that! Their height is part of their character and somewhat part of the style (My chests are purposely elongated for some reason). But thanks anyways for that bit!
Oh and I’ve updated it to say which one Atlas was and Jason (Atlas has the black hair and is shorter, Jason is the taller ginger guy)
Much appreciated!
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You're welcome! I'm glad I could help, and the reason for the height makes sense now!
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AWWWW! It's so nice of you to mention her in real life! I bet she will love this masterpiece~! Fantastic job on this one!
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Thank you so much! I hope she’ll like it!
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Oh boy is that improvement in art I see? ( ﾟ∀ﾟ) It is!
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YEET, I HAVE IMPROVETHED. ‘TIS THE DAY OF IMPROVEMENT.
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