HOME | DD
Dragon-FangX โ Trader Lydia - Caught and Bottled
by-nc-nd
Published: 2013-06-25 03:21:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 18705; Favourites: 138; Downloads: 0
Redirect to original
Description
UPDATE: Most of you were a little confused by what happened in this one. so I thought some quick add ins might fill in the gaps. It's probably not what some of you were hoping for but hopefully it'll help ease up on the confusion on this one enough for you all to enjoy it more.In comic strip time, this chase took 30 hours!
NEXT PAGE: [link]
PREVIOUS PAGE: [link]
Overlord Bob and Related Characters property of ~ZeroForever
Characters, Designs and Art ยฉ *Dragon-FangX
Related content
Comments: 53
Agreed this should have been done in 2 strips instead of one. The switch from panel 2 to 3 covers too much change to feel linear.
๐: 0 โฉ: 1
I really enjoy the premise but like you said the change between 2 and 3 I kinda had to back track to realize that was him as a genie, he is now a cutie so I guess so all is well that ends well :3
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
Uuhhh.. Let's hope those spells and identity confusions are temporary.. รณ.0
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
I wish Lydia would put me in a bottle like that...
๐: 0 โฉ: 1
I wouldn't even resist being bottled...
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
I like the part with the market, where Lydia comes from four directions at once...
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
It took a while, but Sir Robin finally got the TG he had coming to him!
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
Is Lydia owed anything by Queens Barbie and Tammy?
๐: 0 โฉ: 1
nah, them owing money doesn't make sense in the context of them being the big bads previously.
Which case there's no reason for them to not just take what they wanted.
๐: 0 โฉ: 1
True but look at most royalty from about the 1500s on...they owed massive loans to either the church or lenders....Would just like to see Lydia trying to get money out of Barbie and Tammy
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
Love the look in the second-to-last panel! All the chase scenes are funny!
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
So what happens now? Will she be sold, put to work, placed on a shelf until relatives find the money to pay the dept?
๐: 0 โฉ: 1
More like becoming a wish-granting pay-to-use.
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
I don't think the maps are necessary, but the tent panel helped.
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
Very nice. Less confusing and in places, more entertaining.
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
I'd personally hope that she at least gets herself back. Mind alterations aren't fun, cuz it means the original's been replaced.
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
Much better.
It would have been neat to see the harem costume tf sequence as well, though not necessary.
That said, this makes much more sense than the original version.
The how and why of the harem tf was a definite source of confusion.
She got an ethnic tf, a mind alteration, and a change of clothes all in one panel and it wasn't clear how or why.
The maps were a nice touch too but the tent panel, to me was the most useful and important one of the additions.
Thanks for the update.
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
Some people were saying it was confusing so I thought some chase maps and an extra panel would help.
๐: 0 โฉ: 2
I see along her other skills Lydia has mastered Kage Bunshin no Jutsu considering we seem to four different purple trails boxing in the green one at the Harem Bazzar.
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
yeah i noticed, can't blame them as it did seem sudden without the contextual knowledge.
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
forth panel remind me of Nyueki
๐: 0 โฉ: 1
I did at first too, but Id never expect Fang to put Nyu in for a visual cameo (she might have been in the text ending of a raven pic but thats debatable) even though that would be cool to see XD
๐: 0 โฉ: 1
I think this is well done but in a few places it feels like it skipping moments. If you made use of some of the open spaces for micro-panels more to give the idea transitions between locations it would give a smoother flow.
I think this is great all the same, keep up the great work.
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
as much as i like the trader lydia series this does feel kinda rushed and i don't really get whats going on in the last 2 panels
why is she a genie bimbo in the 3 panel i really don't get that
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
this is what happens when you dont pay your debpts people.
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
I get most of it.
1. Nailed by the free sample of TG perfume.
2. Escaped through the public bath house and got zapped removing his/her clothes.
3. Somehow got dressed in a mind altering dress (How did this happen?)
4. Got bushwhacked in the clothing store by Lydia with the genie bottle.
It's number 3 that is making me go huh?
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
Okay, so he was TG'd by perfume, stripped dodging through a bath house, and lost his identity while escaping through a clothing bazaar?
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
eh, this probably could of been extend into two strips. it feels rushed to me.
๐: 0 โฉ: 1
We didn't think about it much when we wrote out the script.
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
nah, she batgnome.
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
| Next =>