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part 4 yahpart 1[link]
part 2[link]
part 3 [link]
part 4 here
part 5
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Comments: 30
SansTheDuncle [2023-10-25 06:32:01 +0000 UTC]
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Army-of-Zero [2012-10-17 20:21:20 +0000 UTC]
what is he saying in the dialog box i cant see it
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Dragondude97 In reply to Army-of-Zero [2012-10-18 00:44:56 +0000 UTC]
sorry Can't really remeber its been awhile
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DeethIrteen [2011-11-02 04:02:33 +0000 UTC]
That's... some odd logic, Mia. "You looked tired and depressed, so I thought I'd eat you!"
Maybe you could've introduced yourself first instead of scaring the shit out of him.
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musicluver818 In reply to DeethIrteen [2011-11-04 18:24:15 +0000 UTC]
Chris: I wasn't scared! I get eaten plenty of times! Maybe I was scared a little, but that's only because she came out of nowhere and I was startled! It's all good now though, Mia and I are friends now.
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Dragondude97 In reply to DeethIrteen [2011-11-02 04:10:18 +0000 UTC]
well since I was Mia's first pray I was depressed and tired so she kida goes around look for people to make feel beter
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DeethIrteen In reply to Dragondude97 [2011-11-02 04:11:07 +0000 UTC]
Not everyone would have the same reaction, though.
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Dragondude97 In reply to DeethIrteen [2011-11-02 04:13:26 +0000 UTC]
I know but that wuts I was kinda going for back then AND I guess my mood changged
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Lexie11701 In reply to Dragondude97 [2012-06-13 05:29:44 +0000 UTC]
:'< *yawns* :'< (my dog got ran over before my birthday and someone brought it up) meh meh meh why why
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Lexie11701 In reply to Dragondude97 [2012-06-13 05:29:23 +0000 UTC]
:'< *yawns* :'< (my dog got ran over before my birthday and someone brought it up) meh meh meh why why
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Lexie11701 In reply to Dragondude97 [2012-06-13 05:29:10 +0000 UTC]
:'< *yawns* :'< (my dog got ran over before my birthday and someone brought it up) meh meh meh why why
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Dragondude97 In reply to DeethIrteen [2011-11-02 04:22:54 +0000 UTC]
I think keep looking or mabye no i don;t know
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musicluver818 [2011-07-25 17:09:16 +0000 UTC]
I'm indigestible anyways so i got nothing to worry about!
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musicluver818 In reply to Dragondude97 [2011-07-25 17:22:19 +0000 UTC]
You can change the dialogue if you'd like and re-submit it, I'm okay with that.
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Dragondude97 In reply to musicluver818 [2011-07-26 04:15:05 +0000 UTC]
can I keep it that way
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musicluver818 In reply to Dragondude97 [2011-07-26 04:51:04 +0000 UTC]
Actually if it's not too much trouble I think you should change the dialogue. It just looks awkward to me. Everything else is great, though!
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musicluver818 In reply to Dragondude97 [2011-07-26 04:35:09 +0000 UTC]
I guess. Maybe in part 5 I can tell her I'm indigestible and this happens to me all the time.
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Dragondude97 In reply to Yatuman [2011-07-25 17:09:24 +0000 UTC]
no not the last page I will countiue
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