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Dark but flameydeath be part
I am the death rider
from the start
sorrow, fear, jelossy and hate
all these things are what i create.
through the shame of my past life,
on over people i let out my striff.
lost in this tormentative dream
i make my way down, to the firey pit,
thats bestode in the ground,
the flames of hell all around.
but i cant see,
Its dissapeared
wheres the fire?
smell of rot?
Its all gone
But i am not
confused, just floting here
all alond, my worst fear.
where is hell? heven or earth?
the darkness around me
we'll its been there since birth
My lost hell
where art thou.
I fell so lonely, traped but ashamed.
Why did this happen, Its you i blame
to bad for heven, but to good for hell
where do i belong tell me, tell me now!
where have you gone?
My lost hell!
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Comments: 30
loneknight [2004-12-05 21:14:04 +0000 UTC]
one word: WICKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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tearofpurity [2004-02-11 13:53:53 +0000 UTC]
Wow you have such amazing rhythm, I can't keep that. It flows so nicely!
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Cersi-13 [2004-02-10 05:12:30 +0000 UTC]
Oh wowies! Your such a good poet! I love your stuff!
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Charla- [2004-02-09 20:54:38 +0000 UTC]
that's deep But ME LIKE! If you no go to heaven or Hell GO LIMBO!!
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dranzer77 In reply to Charla- [2004-02-10 15:57:44 +0000 UTC]
lol yaaaaaay limbo but still im to good for that
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Charla- In reply to dranzer77 [2004-02-10 18:38:29 +0000 UTC]
lol Well then.... YOU STUCK IN HEAVEN!
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dranzer77 In reply to Charla- [2004-02-11 19:59:40 +0000 UTC]
ooooooo noooo not heven they will pt me in horrible white dresses and will try to brade my hair @.@ hhhhhheeeellllllpppppppp
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Charla- In reply to dranzer77 [2004-02-11 22:22:32 +0000 UTC]
lol You rebell!! PANTS ALL THE WAY!! LOL
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dranzer77 In reply to glitter-chan [2004-02-09 18:25:56 +0000 UTC]
^_^ thanx
im not to keen on this one though
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Rina-ran [2004-02-09 17:37:07 +0000 UTC]
AWSOME I LIKES THIS POEM A LOT
nice to know im not the only one who misspelles words and doesnt give a damn... ^^
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dranzer77 In reply to Rina-ran [2004-02-09 17:38:29 +0000 UTC]
lol yeah who care about spelling
im not to keen on this poem i dont think its my best ^_^
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Rina-ran In reply to dranzer77 [2004-02-10 17:29:45 +0000 UTC]
Well, ur poems keep getting better and better ^_^
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dranzer77 In reply to Rina-ran [2004-02-10 17:32:36 +0000 UTC]
^_^ thanx
though i dont realy like this poem lol
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black-rider [2004-02-09 17:33:16 +0000 UTC]
yay!!! death rider!!!! black riders better oh well ¬¬
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dranzer77 In reply to black-rider [2004-02-09 17:33:44 +0000 UTC]
yeah tis a shit poem ne way
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black-rider In reply to dranzer77 [2004-02-09 17:38:11 +0000 UTC]
its got some nice ryming words too ^^ I think its good
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