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Published: 2004-01-10 16:24:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 527; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 91
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The dark aura that surinds your soal,your black heart that dispises the world.
Yu have reached your goal,
of turning pure evil and bringing missary to the earth.
death is drawing nearer, to your scared body.
you lay there, eyes open wide,
your blood burning ten times worse, then the flames of hell.
You are feed up with this life, you walk down stairs,
Into the kitchen you strole, you open a draw.
You reach inside, and pull out a 12 inch blade,
Into your black heart, you plunge the knife.
thinking you can excape the unforgivable tochers you have made.
you can never excape, you can never be forgiven.
the last memory you have,of a scorced, traped soal of haterid,
making its way down to the dark light of hell.
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Comments: 52
Mmm...dark and Macabre 
And I suck at spelling too 
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lol 
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Nice. Too bad I'm an anal when it comes to spelling. >< Great poem.
"to your scared body."- by this I assume you mean sacred? Morbid poem, and a good one at that. Also, I can't help but think that maybe, just maybe you misspelled a lot of words here intentionally.
Good poem.
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lol um hehehe just ignore the spelling mistakes
um what sacred mean?
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hmm... a bit on the literal side... but then again, im biased on symbolical stuff... metaphors and all... tis good, but quite cliche... spell check? or did you meant for all the words to come out like that?
(sorry! im a bit on the technical side when it comes to lit stuff..XP)
btw, why not put up a preview for this? ^-^
lol im not very good at spelling well actuly i could not be botherd to check the spellings
im so lazy
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lol thanx
i know there is alot of spelling mistakes in there
people keep telling me that <.<;
but really im to lazy to chek speelings and i realy dont give a dam
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who's the poem about. Is it someone or no one?
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ummmm no one i just made it up ages ago and decided to put it up
lol its not about mrs jaqes
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hehehehe
it dose sound like im ubsesed of killing mrs jaqes dosnt it
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lol dam she is to good for hell but to evil for heven tehehehehe
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yes limbo childrens hell 
how much i enjoy that
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lol
*yarwn* well i have to get off the computer know dad wants 2 get on and ive been on here since 2pm and its now 11:15 :faints:
tehehehe long time and k=now my but herts from sitting for so long
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lol ok then byebye ^^ we talk lots ^^
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yep ^^ we do talk alot dont we ^.^
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yer its ok i dont watch it much i think ive watched two episods
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lol I love it and i've seen a lot of em' well I'm only poping on cos i got to tape Yu-Gi_oh and do all my home work 
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lol yer u will live
dam that homework
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I know me hate it.. mom a calling
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Heya! Wow this is really cool! It's so amazing! Good images!! I know how it is, you just have to get it outta ur system! I love it
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thanie ^^
yer i dont know what broght it on i just felt like wrigth somthink and it came to me strait away
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wwooaaahhhh way kewl ^O^ nice to find another dark poet ^O^ i love this
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thankie 
at least they eill let me put poems on here they wont let me put up art
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Wahhh!! Cool! I love it! It's really dark and scary and I like stuff like that!! Have you read and of works? They're kinda dark like that.
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thanx
no i havent read that peorons work yet but i will thanx
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lol thanx it just came to me i was doing nowt so i decided to wright it down ^^
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*huggies back* ^_^ no problemo!! i liked it!!
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