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Published: 2016-10-18 02:55:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 1399; Favourites: 56; Downloads: 0
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I started playing Tri-force heroes finally. I had a day off and figured it's about time I pulled it off the shelf.Related content
Comments: 4
AurrieChan [2016-10-27 14:02:10 +0000 UTC]
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Really, looking at this, it is just overall adorable and visually stunning. I've been looking at this for a good awhile and I see nothing wrong with this picture.
What I like:
*The thick lines make the picture pop out, and the colouring with the picture compliments the lines.
*You done the transparency in the the bottle correctly, not too dark nor too bright when looking through. I even enjoy the pink shading in the bottle due to the fairy putting off the light.
*The background colours are simple, and very good with blending. That makes Link pop out a bit more and compliments the whole visually.
*The shading is pretty spot on, I am assuming you made the fairy the centre point of light, and you did pretty good with that. Maybe here and there the shading could of been darker, or brighter, but overall it is pretty good.
What could be improved?:
*Like I said, the shading could be done a little differently in some places in the picture, but overall its pretty good. I would say maybe on the neck, I would of made a bright shading.
*The (my left) hand, the pinky finger looks too think with the lines (ring finger and pinky), maybe reduce the line a bit so the pinky doesn't look so big?
Like I said, there is more good in this picture than there is with bad other than getting down and getting into the small details (which would be really hard to point out unless you inspect the picture for an hour). Visually it is stunning, and I really enjoy the simple background you used for this picture since that compliments Link, and pops him out in the picture.
Keep up the good work sweetie xo
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Draw-out-loud In reply to AurrieChan [2016-10-29 03:50:01 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for the critique, I really appreciate it! I see what you mean about the shadows and the pinky, I'll keep that in mind for revisions. Thank you again!
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AurrieChan In reply to Draw-out-loud [2016-10-29 14:20:15 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome sweetie
xo
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