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Cookie-Ice [2012-12-18 23:55:02 +0000 UTC]

I Love You...
-----------Such sincere yet cliched words. A much rare yet lightly used phrase.
-----------Does anyone know the meaning anymore?
-----------These words were once filled with true passion and truthfullness! Sincerity! Care! Compassion! Hope! Joy! ...
-----------They were said with... love. True, undying love.
Now what?
-----------What is its meaning?
-----------It's rarity has been cut short and now is being used to describe anything...
-----------Despicable, are we not? The speakers of English, the holders of the tongue's that casually use this word...
-----------Ha! Word. It is a phrase yet it feels as if it is one.
-------------------------------------------------------------------------...........
-----------Just looking at it is beautiful.
-----------Its essence coming out through its gentle syllables.
-----------Such a precious treasure should be spoken with meaning... Its true meaning.
-----------In all sincerity, as should all words.
-----------Though these have more power.
--------------------------------I... love... you.

Wonderful poem~ It's cute and well done. You missed some capitals and periods but otherwise it is rather amazing. Write more~

(Above is a quick edited version I did as a... beta copy or so. Just take out the hyphens. )

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Art-Might [2012-08-22 00:28:11 +0000 UTC]

taken to the HEART very nice ^^

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