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Published: 2015-11-27 23:52:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 10390; Favourites: 490; Downloads: 23
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I loved her so much, I almost cried when she was goneSaria, from the Legend Of Zelda, ยฉNintendo
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This was one of my favorite games! I love this!
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You are very much welcome, friend.
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**Adding Critique as Requested in Get-gud **
First of all, I love the motion in this piece, especially in her hair. I can truly imagine the wind blowing the leaves around her as she plays. I also think you did a great job tackling the ocarina(it seems like it would be easy to make this look awkward but it looks natural here). I also love her face!
The main thing I see that could use improvement is the positioning of her legs and feet. To be perfectly honest, I'm a little confused. Is the supposed to be lying down or jumping(I'm not asking to insult, it's just harder to tell without a detailed background)? Either way, both of her legs seem to be bending unnaturally. On the front leg, I think it's mainly the foot that looks out of place.ย
If she is jumping, I just have to comment that the pose seems a little odd for someone playing an instrument. It would seem more appropriate for her to be standing.
Overall, I really like this drawing. I just thought I would be helpful by looking for flaws since you requested a critique.ย ย Good job!
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Thank you for the critique! ^^
So, I wanted her to be floating/flying while playing the ocarina,ย I wanted to make a super dynamic pose but probabily I ended up bending too much the right ankle and doing mistakes over mistakes. Thank you for pointing that out, everyone else just told me about the other leg but now I see that they are both wrong! I'll fix the drawing! :3
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No problem!ย ย Keep up the good work!
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yup, you're right, she's the best!! ^^ and thanks! :3
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Oh my gosh ocarina of time I loved that game!!
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thank you!! ^^ I think there are some mistakes but thanks for your kindness
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maybe it's a bit exagerated xD but thanks!!
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Thank you!! เซฎ( แตฬเซขเฏฐแตฬเซข )แ
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Thanks! I started with the idea of adding more light effects and a background, but it the end it turned out too messy, so I favored a simpler style.
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Niceย ย
(PS: one of the foots looks a little bit weird :'v)
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Mรฉh, I wanted to make the foot crossed, but I only achieved to make it weird. I should fix that ;_;
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