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DreamerWhit β Girls Day Out-initialSketchWIP
Published: 2011-04-25 23:09:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 1006; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 43
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WIP of a Bday present for my best friend!i couldnt stand it, was gonna wait til i was further along to show yall xD but im excited about it!
Its really the first "scene" ive ever done~~
yeah, im gonna fix alot of the mistakes (and add more detail) when i lineart it.....
......fail cars are fail cars.... ill try to fix that too
this picture is gonna kill me.....
but anyways, if you have any advice im open to it!
just dont tear it to pieces xD.... <3
-will scrap later-
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waw beautiful and complex sketch ! Courage for the colo
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LOOOOOOVEEEEEEEEEEEEE ITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT.
Okay so the car to the right is just a little too far tilted to the left. And some of the buildings are a bit off in regards to the vanishing point, otherwise it's FABULOUS.
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yah i figured out what i did wrong with the cars,~ the buildings are right i checked, but the cars i did in the wrong perspective 
haha thank you!
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DOnΒ΄t worry too much, you made a great job!!! XD
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very impressive as usual. The outline is great, your characters are very recognizable. The cars are better then I expected, I'm sure you can make them look great though
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Saweet! Buildings and everything! Good to see you're pushing your skills : D Looking goodilicious so far
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goodilicious? hahaha awesome word xD
thanks! im trying O.o
anything major you think needs fixing?
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Mwell, I can see that you havent applied the perspective of the buildings to the cars. See the cars like box-shapes, just like to do with the buildings and then go from there ( : This way foreshortening will pretty much work itself out.
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ok cool thanks~
**attempts cars again** xD
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Ahhh, it's a really good start! Keep going, and all that.
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