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A Matter of TimeYou think Sandy's got vengeance in its eyes?
You see vengeance everywhere don’t you?
In the fast, wet winds churning around your Queens apartment
In the lightning flashes on Ocean Parkway where we walked once like a
Couple of refugees.
The waves will be taller than you, they’re saying
But I imagine you sitting on a grey dock somewhere
Oblivious of official warnings
Your dark wavy hair sticking to your forehead of scattered lies
And losses,
Your hard, careless body framed in endless brine.
I might not be allowed to love you anymore
But the rules of capturing, consuming and catenating happen to be
As fluid as that road where water now rushes in the direction of
Gaping news cameras.
If you think Sandy’s got vengeance in its eyes
Why don’t you stop hiding behind words and walls and webs
And have a staring contest with me?
© Debjani Chakravarty 2012
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Comments: 25
joeltonongkh [2012-11-15 11:10:32 +0000 UTC]
god bless. sincerely hope everything will be fine!
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sparkpenguin [2012-11-15 04:01:23 +0000 UTC]
i love the wild passionate images in this; love... BAD love... or good love gone bad... feels like a hurricane in your heart. all that energy, and yes-- vengeance!
loved it.
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Dreamydeb In reply to sparkpenguin [2012-11-15 05:02:47 +0000 UTC]
Passion, so inconvenient, so fiery. There is more beauty in hurricanes than in Monet's still waters don't you think? Thanks for the visit.
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dibfanlover [2012-11-14 23:46:16 +0000 UTC]
sandy's is coverd in snow and they said its not even snow its like concrete snow bricks and their power is out.i feel sorry 4 them
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Dreamydeb In reply to dibfanlover [2012-11-15 02:25:45 +0000 UTC]
I know...I feel sorry and honestly a little angry at our unpreparedness to deal with these calamities. The "personal" angle just makes it more complicated. Thanks for the visit!
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dibfanlover In reply to Dreamydeb [2012-11-16 02:39:57 +0000 UTC]
Im in the 8th grade in my classmates are trying our best to help
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ardentfem [2012-11-14 20:03:58 +0000 UTC]
I can relate...very much...almost too well...down to the dark hair. Perfect and congrats on the DD.
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Dreamydeb In reply to ardentfem [2012-11-14 20:27:14 +0000 UTC]
That warmed my heart. Thank you.
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ARTBYTERESA [2012-11-14 08:23:40 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful! Congratulations! Im so happy for you!
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Dreamydeb In reply to ARTBYTERESA [2012-11-14 17:01:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for being a support and an inspiration
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Dreamydeb In reply to bimbi [2012-11-07 18:55:12 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Bimbi. Long time no see?
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takemetoverona [2012-11-05 17:04:45 +0000 UTC]
I love this poem! It mixes the violence of the storm with human anger and loss perfectly. Well done!
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Dreamydeb In reply to takemetoverona [2012-11-05 17:44:38 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for reading. Love, even old dreamlike semi-forgotten love can be so messy! Raises its head now and then in...meaningless stormy violence.
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monstroooo [2012-11-03 16:51:24 +0000 UTC]
I don't think the hurricane is the only force of nature on display in this poem. I think love and pride are very much on the line as well
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Dreamydeb In reply to monstroooo [2012-11-04 05:03:28 +0000 UTC]
Yes. Yes.
Thanks for reading
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Dreamydeb In reply to TwentyfootAngels [2012-11-03 01:44:28 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Alexandria, thanks a lot!
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