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Published: 2016-04-25 03:13:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 2158; Favourites: 81; Downloads: 15
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Wowee, finished the first ever Ref Commission!Thanks for being the beta tester for this commission
Hopefully there will be more of theses in the future!
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aww... isn't she a toughie and a badass cutie.
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Lol super late critique XD
Actually ive been wanting to do a critique on this but well, i kinda need to face some personal issues haha XD
Lets see ... for a reference sheet, i think its a great idea to give it a simple back ground color so it wont be too distracting XD and i like how you provided a 3 side rotation of her body referense along with a complete color palette which includes the colors for the shadings and stuff, and the way you draw the sword separately and give a cut out picture of the pendant is a really great way to help artists to see the deatils for her sword and pendant (mainly the sword lol, because the pendant is really simple XD)
And the way you give an extra trivia on the bottom right corner there makes this ref to not only fun to look at, but to be read as well? XD plus it helps artist to focus more on that extra infoXD
And also the way you give the complete picture of sel with that awesome pose makes it easier for people to get the feeling of the character sel, who is a brave demon slayer ^^
How ever, there are some things that i want to suggest XD
First i see that you provided a 3 side rotation of the naked version of sel, but what about her suit? A 3 side rotation of not just sel's, but ANY characters outfit would be REALLY helpful for the other artists to draw the character, especially if the character has a detailed outfit like sel.
because even though you provided the full picture with the pose over there, im afraid that because of the pose some of the details got covered, such as the details on her shoes (although the pose end up giving us a clear shot of her soles XD)Β
And maybe it would make the ref to be more fun if you also include a short bio of the character? Such as Age, occupation, and powers and stuff ^^Β
Oh and by the way, arent the purple on sel's ears and the purple on sel's tails supposed to be the same shade of purple? XDΒ
Anyway this reference is neat and organized! It somehow reminds me of a character profile in some sort of games hahaha XD
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Wow thank you so much for the critique! To address some of your queries:
The three side rotation was done naked because Twin didn't pay the full amount and so I felt re doing the complex suit three times would have been a little difficult for what I was getting paid, also I was trialing it out so I wasn't really sure whether to put clothes on characters, but I totally agree clothes would be way better!
Some good points! I just usually copy and paste what ever the person wants me to put in the extras, but all of those are great ideas
I'm not sure, I think there are a few variations depending on the artist, but Twin hasn't said anything otherwise so I'm going to assume it's alright haha
Glad you like it! I made a new one just recently so you can see how I fared, I took some examples from what you said 
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The only thing wrong with this OC is that she has two tails. That trait should be exclusive to Tails only.
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There's nothing wrong with her having two tails. Besides she's got a reason to, she's a kitsune. In otherwords a multitailed Japanese fox spirit.Β
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Okay then, but she's still flightless, correct?
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Yes, well without her wings she is. Even still having two tails is not a trait exclusive to Tails. I'll ask you not to judge my FC for having something as trivial as having two tails, when your FC has something as Sue-ish as creating the Chaos Emeralds. Good day to you, sir.Β
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You're welcome. And plus I really love how great the slayer suit looked in this design.
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Looks super awesome! I'm sure she'll love it! :3
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Ooh!!! Look at that my first ever reference sheet! Thanks so much and I'm glad I could be the beta tester!
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Yup! I do. Can I note ya about something please?
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Saw this on stream! Great to see the finished product, really love the glowing colors!
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