HOME | DD
DrFaustusAU — The Call of Cthulhu - Pages 32 - 33
Published: 2012-01-20 16:25:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 33352; Favourites: 100; Downloads: 712
Redirect to original
Description
H.P. Lovecraft's The Call of Cthulhu (for beginning readers).Next: [link]
Previous: [link]
(This is the updated version of page 22 here: [link] )
Related content
Comments: 5
I reluctantly put forth that I agree with scratchfury (even before I saw his message) that this page somehow seems far less than the earlier version, but also that - with the exception of this page - the update pages have otherwise been rousing successes.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Et tu, Clovis15?
Okay, okay. Updated artwork uploaded. The changes bring it closer in line with the previous version.
Thanks for the feedback, folks!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
That does look much better, thanks for telling me about it or I probably would have completely missed it (at least until I bought the book). Having seen both versions now, I guess I would say the first update wasn't busy enough compared to the original page. The addition of the extra background elements really made a world of difference here.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
This is still great, and most of your updates have been spot on, but I think that your old version of this page had more panache.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Fair enough, that's cool.
The Cthulhu on the previous version never looked right to me (in particular the head). Also, while the Old Ones were okay, I wanted to diversify them a little more.
This updated version is much more consciously Seussian (inspired mainly by the VROOMS pages in _On Beyond Zebra_).
👍: 0 ⏩: 0