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Published: 2010-12-21 05:59:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 519; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 8
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Oh my! And the ass kicking commences! Hmmm. And I thought commencement only happens at college at the end of the year...
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my dear doctor, i would like to congratulate you on this one, it's very very nice in manners of layout and driving the eye easily through the page, just one small detail was missing, the lettering doesn't do the page justice in manners of where the words are, size and style, really with good lettering this one would have been another master piece by you.
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Hmm, any suggestions on the lettering? Is it hard to read or just not matching the art?
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ok here's a few things to consider, maybe i'm wrong, but then again maybe i'm right, your call:
1. CAPTIONS, they are way too cool than free lettering like the one you have here, that's unless your panel is open on a white background.
2. Increase the font size 1 or 2 points, readable letters are always a plus no matter what you see in modern days (Ultimates for example were very poorly lettered for a long time comics fan like me, their lettering was very small, and in many cases on too dark gradients that made it difficult to read)
3. Consistency, your caption lettering varies from one panel to another, my advice keep captions with the same font size, and same caption colors unless the person who is talking in the caption changes. variation of size in word baloons is cool depending on the mood you wanna emphasize, or the volume of speech.
4. word baloons, should look like baloons, trying fancy squares leave a feeling of ammaturity that's not valid in the case of one as talented and experienced as you doc.
i hope i was of any kind of help.
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thanks for the observations. After this was printed and they totally printed it too small, I am going to increase font size and aim for a more consistent look with the sizes.
Readability is the number one consideration in any page.
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glad to be of help doc, i wish i could really add something to the already amazing work
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Duuuuude, you could so totally have this comic published. o.o
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Yep, getting there, slowly.
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That story look...familiar. 
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Top panel is the best part of it...
...and yay, large words that few people know off the top of their heads!
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Thanks!
And thank you for the comments!
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Man, I love the colors and contrast on the top panel.
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Thanks!
And thanks for the comments!
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