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Published: 2006-05-18 03:07:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 318; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 38
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Models: Jeremy and Kitten KiLzJust a pracitce shoot for me. Trying to get into taking portraits of people. Please leave comments and crique, thanks.
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It looks nice overall. Their emotions are obviously true, or atleast they are good enough actors. Heh, but seriously, emotion is something you really want to keep an eye out for really. I've seen too many portraits of people who are timid or who just don't know how to convey certain things, but you do not have this problem I can see.
The only thing that bus me about this picture is the shadow from the flash. It'd be fine if you were planning to edit the background in some way, but as far as straight portraits, flash shadows are a real 'turn off' for most critics. Its really hard to avoid unless you have the correct equipment, for example those 300K lamps with the umbrellas to help light subjects and the background, or a flash that can be placed on multiple angles.
But so far it looks good, atleast you didn't cut off half of one of the model's face like I've seen a lot of people do. Its a very good angle for the romance feel, and it definetely conveys emotion, which is a great advantage.
Hope this helps for you...
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Yeah it would be better if i did have those 300k lamps. All i had for lighting was three office lambs, and i couldn't find my tripod so i had to use the lamp. Thanks for your comment and tips, i will keep it in mind the next time i shoot. Thanks again.
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No problem. Just keep up the good work and before you know it you'll find other ways to work around the flash.
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I hope so, and thanks again for your comments
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