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........................My worst enemy.... lineless
Last time I attempted this... was over a year ago... with the character being lineless that is...
So actually this is only a part of a 'cover' of a fangame... xD
Including Dark Excalibur Sawnik... becuz. Oh and Tails as the Blacksmith which is gonna be tha main one to play in it.
If it was real that is :'D
*smashes head on keyboard*
I wonder if I'll be able to pull myself to finish the other two characters on the cover though xD
Art (c) *Drytil
Amy (c) SEGA
Do NOT recolor/trace/edit or steal~
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Comments: 37
Coral-Line [2011-11-18 22:24:38 +0000 UTC]
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First Critique I've done in a while lol. XD
Well I just gotta say, you have improved a lot! Especially with shading! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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I like the pose and the effects, but I LOVE the shading! Its so detailed! :3 I love the flow and shading you did for the hair/quills and the lighting! c:
This is one of the best pieces I have seen from you! ^^
The only things I can say to improve on is the background... unless it's just me it looks a little too plain with the detail of the character and image itself. Although, it may just be me as a detailed background may have looked a bit too overdone. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Also, the inside of the ear looks TOO shaded, or it may not be shaded enough, I just think that the outline of the inside of the ear is too dark.
But all in all, this piece is amazing and I wish to see more like this in the future! ^^
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Drytil In reply to Coral-Line [2011-11-19 14:56:50 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the critique <3333
Yea, I can see now that I did do too much shading on the ears xD *need to fix stuff like that when it's not 11 pm* :'D
I'll think of that next time c:
Yah, well there isn't much of a background to begin with xD it's just black with a blue brush which was used to make the blue shine.
Elsewise, nothing :'D
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Coral-Line In reply to Drytil [2011-11-19 20:41:12 +0000 UTC]
Your very welcome ^^
Ok c: Yay
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UltimateGameMaster [2012-06-15 23:03:13 +0000 UTC]
THIS is the Amy Rose I want to see. Mature, knowledgeable, powerful...her own woman.
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TriickyStaR [2011-11-20 18:14:05 +0000 UTC]
*goes to find the other lineless deviation |D*
Girl, this is AMAZING... I love how you did it all especially the dress c:
Very nice, keep it up :3
Dark Excalibur Sawnik and Tails the Blacksmith?!! SOUNDS AWESOME
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Axe-Cell [2011-11-19 09:14:07 +0000 UTC]
Allow me to begin with her head first, because I like how the 'lines' shine on Amy's fringes with the orb (I guess) below them. The uneven shines and shadows on the golden disk piece at the side of her head is a nice touch (pretty much because I like irregular objects XD). You could use a darker tone for the two locks to the left of this piece (Amy's right), as they appear to have less shading when I compared it with the locks on the right (Amy's left).
As for her ear, the line showing the inside appears to be too thick. If I were to explain it as a triangle, the bottom line should be slightly thinner than the two and positioned higher than the shape of her head. As for the shading on her visible ear, I think that the shadowed ear tip is quite unnecessary, in my opinion.
Moving down to her arms (goodness hell, I hate this part -_-; ), her right arm appears to have two bends instead of one. There isn't much for me to point out here, and same goes to the lower third part of this piece. When I'd first saw this, I'd thought that it was a bookmark of some-sort, and the fangame idea was the last thing I'd expected. Now I'm gonna wait for the other two.
(I wonder who's going to be the third one for the cover besides Tails?)
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Drytil In reply to Axe-Cell [2011-11-19 15:34:20 +0000 UTC]
Thanks chu for the critiques
Yah, I lost my focus when shading the ears, so it got waaaay to shaded around it xD
The double bending isn't supposed to be there, it's mostly the gloves that is a little weird looking at this view :'D I need to work more on getting it to actually fit in more.
Can you gueeessss? :'D It's not that hard to guess which the 3rd person on the cover's gonna be
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Axe-Cell In reply to Drytil [2011-11-20 00:32:53 +0000 UTC]
You're very much welcome, miss.
Ehhhh.... , Sir Gawain (Knuckles)?
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Drytil In reply to Axe-Cell [2011-11-20 11:36:07 +0000 UTC]
Nuuuuu xD I did mention the 3rd one on the cover in the desc
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Axe-Cell In reply to Drytil [2011-11-21 03:35:45 +0000 UTC]
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- - - *few minutes later*
So, all three main cover characters are in the description? That means the last one is Dark Excalibur Sonic?
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JetFlower22 [2011-11-19 09:12:58 +0000 UTC]
This is lovely! I love the way you did her hair/spines! I think you did a great job!
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ScouterV [2011-11-19 08:05:13 +0000 UTC]
Very awesome, yo. Looks like you had no trouble, really.
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wii1110 [2011-11-19 03:19:30 +0000 UTC]
Well, it seems you have conquered lineless here XP
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wii1110 In reply to Drytil [2011-11-19 20:39:15 +0000 UTC]
Well, you're well on your way ^^
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SunshinetheCat [2011-11-18 22:31:46 +0000 UTC]
Such glorious esscence in this picture~QAQ
You have done a marvelous job portraying one of my fave characters~
Incredible job.~
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SunshinetheCat In reply to Drytil [2011-11-20 00:43:24 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome!~
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DSIFreakTheRealOne [2011-11-18 22:24:10 +0000 UTC]
So Cool
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cuddlezz [2011-11-18 22:16:07 +0000 UTC]
This is totally amazing! I think it looks simply gorgeous without the lines! It's very well done! <3 c:
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