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Published: 2016-08-12 05:57:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 806; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 3
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Description This whole scene was actually kind of difficult to write/panel;
I wanted to make his dad menacing and show that he's abusive without actually showing the physical abuse or use foul language... all without showing his face.

And now Otto really has disappeared.

That second panel is a lot like a gesture Jupiter made way back in Chapter Three . No wonder Otto bristled up when Jupes touched him on the shoulder. :0

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Comments: 24

rachelillustrates [2017-09-07 22:21:16 +0000 UTC]

Whoa.

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Jedder77 [2016-08-14 02:53:38 +0000 UTC]

What the WHAT?! Good job making dad bad!

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DrZime In reply to Jedder77 [2016-08-14 06:38:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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bscruffy [2016-08-13 02:40:08 +0000 UTC]

Well I've heard this put more nicely by parents and yet these are the words that kids hear anyway. Ouch!  Well done art, but Ouch!

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DrZime In reply to bscruffy [2016-08-13 13:55:46 +0000 UTC]

I know what you mean. :0

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BlazingCoral [2016-08-12 22:36:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh gosh, this is horrendous. What a terrible person. I'm glad you didn't show his face--it doesn't deserve to be remembered.

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DrZime In reply to BlazingCoral [2016-08-13 13:55:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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1tsNert0rN0thing [2016-08-12 18:49:43 +0000 UTC]

please tell me that terrible man dies later in the comic TT

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DrZime In reply to 1tsNert0rN0thing [2016-08-13 13:55:10 +0000 UTC]

We won't be seeing him much in the comic. But, we do know he's in prison so there's that at least.

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AmyEWilliams92 [2016-08-12 15:44:28 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate you not showing abuse because that would've been not only difficult to read but also to see. And while I know you mentioned this was hard to write, you nailed the effect perfectly. I greatly commend you, Zimeta.

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DrZime In reply to AmyEWilliams92 [2016-08-13 13:52:25 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thanks!

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kevintheradioguy [2016-08-12 11:38:35 +0000 UTC]

I wonder, is it reallt something that happend, or is it how Otto remembers it?

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DrZime In reply to kevintheradioguy [2016-08-12 14:22:23 +0000 UTC]

It's something that really happened.

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WritterInTheArtHat [2016-08-12 09:56:05 +0000 UTC]

SHIT DUDE! You stopped your son just to say that? You're just the worst kind of person. LEMME AT HIM! LEMME AT HIM!

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DrZime In reply to WritterInTheArtHat [2016-08-12 14:25:36 +0000 UTC]

I'll just have to make a deleted scene where you come in and punch him. XD

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WritterInTheArtHat In reply to DrZime [2016-08-12 18:29:23 +0000 UTC]

It would be a pleasure.

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wolfian [2016-08-12 06:51:51 +0000 UTC]

And yet, who's out of sight forever now? Unfortunate that it took his mother's murder to get his 'father' put away.

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DrZime In reply to wolfian [2016-08-12 14:27:53 +0000 UTC]

Haha, that's true. No one's going to be seeing him for a long time.

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wolfian In reply to DrZime [2016-08-13 00:26:46 +0000 UTC]

What'd he get, 50 to life?

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VioletWhirlwind [2016-08-12 06:31:38 +0000 UTC]

Ah geez...that is NOT the way a father should talk to his son...Poor Otto.

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Curriaan [2016-08-12 06:25:30 +0000 UTC]

God, this really struck my heart hard. Poor Otto. That's definitely a shattering moment.

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DrZime In reply to Curriaan [2016-08-12 14:28:50 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad it has an effect!

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MoonyMina [2016-08-12 06:00:36 +0000 UTC]

*wipes a tear*

nobody should ever hear something like that...


but again, a perfect page, it conveys all that so well...

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DrZime In reply to MoonyMina [2016-08-12 14:29:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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