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DSShadowPyro — You and I
Published: 2015-02-15 09:14:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 308; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Can you believe meAre you going to be there
Right to the end
Life long edging ever closer
Author of my heart
All so new
Never will I seek more
Due to this desire
Always on my mind
Around me like a humming bird
Revealed my inner being
Onslaught to my heart
Never ending story
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Comments: 2
From a poetry aspect, I love especially the last/third paragraph. The hummingbird metaphor is beautiful. I like the overall structure with the middle paragraph breaking it up.
From a content perspective, this is beautiful. And you know my answers.
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