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Published: 2008-07-03 15:31:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 377; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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Description 7/3/2008

It seep helplessly out of my cranium
Flowing effortlessly
Like whispers of sinful love
Or what others would perceive as so

Red

Warm

My eyes bruised
Outside I am destroyed
But inside
I am alive with love

They spit on me as they leave me
To die
To cry
Out for the one man I truly love

Die Faggot!

With a gun barrel to my head
I cried out loud

I love you!

If I could go back
I will die all over again for you
Just to feel your lips upon mine
One last time
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He forced himself inside me

This is what you are suppose to like!!!

This is human nature!!!

Tears ran down my face
As I felt him ramming himself deeper inside me
Giggles are heard around me
From the Catholic girls who made my life hell
Because of my love for her

If I can feel her lips around me just one more time
Her delicate hands cupping my face
The sweet scent of her body

Take it, dyke!

He ranted
As he continued

Once he finished inside me
The girls all took turns beating me

He took a bat to my head
Reminding me that my love for her is a sin

I ignored all this
As my last thoughts are completely consumed
With images of her

I take my last breath
While my blood runs freely into the earth

Die Dyke!


I love you!

If I could go back
I will die all over again for you
Just to feel your lips upon mine
One last time
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Comments: 12

Autistic-Wolf [2008-07-16 01:42:44 +0000 UTC]

you took gay bashing to a whole new literal level

I felt the first to be more poetic, and the second to be more caustic.

very nice, of course only one problem...
"It seep helplessly out of my cranium"
what?

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AutumWitchCharmed7 [2008-07-14 04:05:21 +0000 UTC]

this is amazing captures so many raw emotions this is your art and i love it!!

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duckie2318 In reply to AutumWitchCharmed7 [2008-07-15 19:51:46 +0000 UTC]

aww thanks so much

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deriw-eixip [2008-07-06 07:36:14 +0000 UTC]

i love the fuck out of it (lol?) very moving. you're good at that <3

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duckie2318 In reply to deriw-eixip [2008-07-08 21:55:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks hun!

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deriw-eixip In reply to duckie2318 [2008-07-09 22:00:18 +0000 UTC]

np! long time no read ^^ i missed it

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CountSixstring [2008-07-05 10:12:51 +0000 UTC]

Wow. I am in love with this.

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duckie2318 In reply to CountSixstring [2008-07-08 21:55:35 +0000 UTC]

aww

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rodentfanatic [2008-07-05 03:12:35 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I'm gay, and I hear about this stuff, and...wow. It's just...I don't even have the words for it, you know?

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duckie2318 In reply to rodentfanatic [2008-07-08 21:56:42 +0000 UTC]

yah it is crazy...I read on [link] about how jamaicans do not tolerate homosexuality whatsoever...police don't try to help when mobs of people beat up people that are gay..its very sad..thank u for the comment

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EuphoricCreations [2008-07-05 00:21:27 +0000 UTC]

wendy you need to publish. There is not one person who i can think of who does writing as deep and brutally honest as yours and structures it as creatively as you do. And happy 4th of july, miss you

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duckie2318 In reply to EuphoricCreations [2008-07-08 21:57:49 +0000 UTC]

Wow, your comment really brought a smile to my face! thanks so much...Ive been so busy lately but I definetly am going to post more

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