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Is anyone else tired and disgusted that so many stories have violence just for violence's sake? No logical plot, just a vehicle for harming someone else.
It can be anything: "bursting", brain washing, transformation, shrinking, being eaten, I found out the options are limitless.
In any way, something that permanently removes a character from the story (and existence), be it by making it vanish, die, diseapear, removing it from existance itself, or anything, then saying that since the character didn't really "die", it doesn't count. lol whut?
And the worst is the trend to make the offender be some kind of "hero" in the story, the main character, and horrible ammounts of plot armor to protect him/her.
It just damages the "suspension of disbelief" that helps you enjoy a piece of ficiton.
Heck, I read the description of a character I found, to a friend online, and she said "that character is clearly cruel", yet the author wrote down that the character was not evil.

I like bursting stories, but only if there's a reason for it. A GOOD story is just that... a story that happens to have bursting, not a bursting that has words thrown around it as a "story."
If the main character IS a psychopath, even a "normal" and "loveable" one, be it. Accidents, villains, revenge. But when a character acts "out of character", just for the heck of it... It gets dumb.

So, here's... uh... Michelle, the main character of my story. She's your average school girl. She never harmed a person more than the usual gossip, or eventual slapping fest with a jealous school mate. One day, she decided to pull a prank on someone. She thought about inflating some random person till she burst, or turn a guy into a chick, damned be his past and previous life, or maybe brain wash some girl into being someone's sex slave, or turn someone into an object and send it by mail to another country, or just gag someone with a jawbreaker into their mouth.
Unfortunally, all she managed to get was a normal hand gun, so it had to do. And the people around, the witnesses, she'll deal with them soon. Can't let her get caught now, can we?
And she's not evil, nor a psychopath, nor a bad person. It just happened that the victim... stoped existing. Shit happens, right?

PS: If someone felt offended by it, good. My job here is done. Feel free to insult me as you see fit.

PS2: Wooh, DA now has options for why a deviation is marked mature. DA is finally growing up.

PS3: Cute prank DA did. I just wonder if whoever wrote it, knows what the mudkips thing was really about... Damn, I wish I had a PS3... or at least that my PS2 were working... need to get off my lazy arse and get it fixed. I miss kicking butt and taking names with Kratos.

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Is anyone else tired and disgusted that so many stories have violence just for violence's sake? No logical plot, just a vehicle for harming someone else.
It can be anything: "bursting", brain washing, transformation, shrinking, being eaten, I found out the options are limitless.
In any way, something that permanently removes a character from the story (and existence), be it by making it vanish, die, diseapear, removing it from existance itself, or anything, then saying that since the character didn't really "die", it doesn't count. lol whut?
And the worst is the trend to make the offender be some kind of "hero" in the story, the main character, and horrible ammounts of plot armor to protect him/her.
It just damages the "suspension of disbelief" that helps you enjoy a piece of ficiton.
Heck, I read the description of a character I found, to a friend online, and she said "that character is clearly cruel", yet the author wrote down that the character was not evil.

I like bursting stories, but only if there's a reason for it. A GOOD story is just that... a story that happens to have bursting, not a bursting that has words thrown around it as a "story."
If the main character IS a psychopath, even a "normal" and "loveable" one, be it. Accidents, villains, revenge. But when a character acts "out of character", just for the heck of it... It gets dumb.

So, here's... uh... Michelle, the main character of my story. She's your average school girl. She never harmed a person more than the usual gossip, or eventual slapping fest with a jealous school mate. One day, she decided to pull a prank on someone. She thought about inflating some random person till she burst, or turn a guy into a chick, damned be his past and previous life, or maybe brain wash some girl into being someone's sex slave, or turn someone into an object and send it by mail to another country, or just gag someone with a jawbreaker into their mouth.
Unfortunally, all she managed to get was a normal hand gun, so it had to do. And the people around, the witnesses, she'll deal with them soon. Can't let her get caught now, can we?
And she's not evil, nor a psychopath, nor a bad person. It just happened that the victim... stoped existing. Shit happens, right?

PS: If someone felt offended by it, good. My job here is done. Feel free to insult me as you see fit.

PS2: Wooh, DA now has options for why a deviation is marked mature. DA is finally growing up.

PS3: Cute prank DA did. I just wonder if whoever wrote it, knows what the mudkips thing was really about... Damn, I wish I had a PS3... or at least that my PS2 were working... need to get off my lazy arse and get it fixed. I miss kicking butt and taking names with Kratos.