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johntisbury [2010-01-08 22:32:40 +0000 UTC]

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I love the use of the ribbon and the self-imposed blindfold. The niggle that stuck me was the cropping down the right-hand side, the black edge is wider at the top than the bottom. I find your framing is too close to the elbow, looks like a mistake in framing rather than a deliberate decision to crop the elbow like you've done on the other side. For me the background is a little too dominant, I'd have dropped it more out of focus or moved the model further away from it so less light fell on it rendering it darker. I like the lighting on the model & the exposure and overall sharpness is good.

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e-string In reply to johntisbury [2010-01-10 16:46:04 +0000 UTC]

No rotating was done d-eye, it's just raw film and I love to leave it as unaltered as possible. If I were to print it, I would likely crop out the black line.

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d-eye In reply to johntisbury [2010-01-09 05:55:51 +0000 UTC]

The impression I get from the black line on the right and at the very top left is an image that has been rotated slightly and cropped.

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Kurfuerst1485 [2017-05-19 06:06:05 +0000 UTC]

awaiting her fate ...

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tempsii [2017-03-26 03:38:11 +0000 UTC]

loving the fullness

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tempsii [2017-03-10 03:08:02 +0000 UTC]

what a bod

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tempsii [2017-01-03 05:14:35 +0000 UTC]

What a body

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fuhqno [2014-04-01 01:48:38 +0000 UTC]

Sweet use of intimate wear with the ribbon and the arms up. More like this please!

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YOSHIMETAL [2010-01-27 20:53:17 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful

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Akemisatya [2010-01-09 07:46:49 +0000 UTC]

Hey babe

in my humble opinion...

I like what's going on.. it's sexy and intimate. I like the concentration on her tits, lips and self-blindfold... however.. I feel that for the mood that the light is too bright and the background distracting. Personally, I would rather concentrate on the Lady's sexiness and have no distractions. I'd also love to see another frame with this, perhaps her looking at the camera.. or anything, really.. as long as it was as sincere as this seems to be. Overall, I like it, and whatever you did to get this, you should do more


xoxo,
Meagan

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e-string In reply to Akemisatya [2010-01-10 17:17:36 +0000 UTC]

Well, the girl is amazing and gave me an assload of good (I think) shots, so I've now uploaded a couple more and have a few yet to come.

Thanks so much for your thoughts, I definitely appreciate it and am always willing to learn from you. Let's shoot each other next time I'm in NY!!

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Akemisatya In reply to e-string [2010-01-27 23:13:03 +0000 UTC]

I would love to
you know.. if I'm in NY, haha.

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msr2109 [2010-01-08 22:55:32 +0000 UTC]

I love London Andrews...she is so phat.

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S-U-B-L-I-M-E [2010-01-08 20:08:17 +0000 UTC]

Brilliant shot...stunning model!

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slephoto [2010-01-08 19:48:07 +0000 UTC]

Love what you did here, Erin. Great tonal range, nice detail on London's skin, the white blindfold sets off her dark hair & lips, and the "busy" background is far enough back to not distract PLUS it has enough white in it to keep her hair from getting lost.

Were the parted lips your idea, or hers? It's a perfect touch.

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e-string In reply to slephoto [2010-01-10 16:59:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks James!

I believe the parted lips were all her. As I'm sure you know, she's amazing with little to no direction!

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