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Earl-Hayate — The Sun and the Moon (part two)
Published: 2012-05-11 20:04:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 655; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 18
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Pretty much explained what I needed to. If I continue to get good reviews the facfic will continue, enjoy!Related content
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celestia and luna hug
Luna:Sister why r u a swan O_O
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I am really liking this perspective. can't wait for the next chapter!
One word of advice though, you keep using the word fold, are you meaning foal as is young horse?
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Yeah, my Word program is weird, sometimes it autocorrects what I speed type, and I probably didn't notice. xD Thanks for telling me though.. now I'll know to double check it.. I bet I actually did it in the first chapter by accident. I literally stayed away for more than twenty-four hours and had to triple check it for spelling mistakes because I was so flipping tired.
I'm glad you got what I was trying to say, thanks. xDD
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ah I see, it makes sense. and your very welcome.
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Yeah, it's really Luna maturing, she's not really Nightmare Moon. She just has never seen herself as an adult, which looks similar to Nightmare, so she thinks she's turning back into Nightmare.
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SOOOO sad 
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Oh, your icons? Yeah~ where can I get a Pinkie?
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