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His figure is blurry, trembling from the waves of heat that lick my body like fiery tongues. Through my eyelids i see him dressing up, glancing me with gratefulness and a hint of contempt.As he opens the door, i can't feel but thankful for that sudden breeze of his departure, lifting the covers and cooling the incandescent cotton altar of sin we just shared.
I look at my fingertips, where small drops of sweat seem to form, denouncing the recent intense bloodrush.
The sheets cling to every curve of my body, covering my pores with wet guilt.
My hair, freed from his grip, stick to my back and forehead as i desperately gasp for the moist air.
Now, alone, in a room with no trace of his presence, I remember the warmth of two wheaten helitropes between the arms of my muse...
And for a brief moment i feel my skin soaking with her perfume and sliding onto hers with the cocunut milk poured on my breasts, under the black waterfall of her curls and her emerald moons lighting up my night.
And i long to sink in that enamel lake between her legs and quench my thirst from her stream, as she drowns her last sigh between my wet lips.
But a persistent sunray slips through the blinds and nails my thigh, while my blood still boils from his burning breath, his chest firmly pressing mine, his eruptive relief burning my innards, and a numb disappointment shrouds me, like a child whose biological experiment failed.
Heat makes silence more dense and i feel i'm choking already from his sweaty scent running down my neck.
And there's nothing else to do but get in the shower and let the frozen water, like myriad dewdrops from her eyes, wash him off my body and sink his existence into oblivion.
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Comments: 26
AnotherJuliette [2006-09-19 13:08:24 +0000 UTC]
S'auto edw de briskw kati na dior8wsw. Einai ontws polu-polu kalogrammeno kai prosegmeno, kai h istoria me aggizei, me endiaferei. Einai grammeno apo polu endiaferousa optikh gwnia, me polu entones eikones kai alh8ofanestato [alh8ino?] sunais8hma. Pragmatika, to sunais8hma dinei thn ais8hsh pws einai alh8ino, prepei na hr8es polu konta se auton ton xarakthra [thn kopela] an esu ton eftia3es, h na eisai polu konta sthn kopela an einai alh8ino proswpo.
Polu kalh douleia.
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Ebonessa In reply to AnotherJuliette [2006-09-20 17:18:18 +0000 UTC]
Sto sugekrimeno kapws taftizomai ondws me tin irwida, kai sto sunaisthima kai stin katastasi... Se efxaristw paaara polu gia ta eksairetika helpful sxolia sou!
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AnotherJuliette In reply to Ebonessa [2006-09-21 20:54:30 +0000 UTC]
Παρακαλώ, και επί τέλους παρακαλώ στα ελληνικά.
[κοινώς, έφτασα στην Αγγλία]
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vollmond [2006-08-28 12:16:24 +0000 UTC]
Epeidi paei para polus kairos apo tote pou sou to eipa teleutaia fora, tha to ksanapo. Nomizo oti o,ti thema kai na piaseis tha to perigrapseis me ton pio omorfo tropo. It's a gift Mpravo sou, i alitheia einai oti kai mena mou leipsan ta panemorfa poihmata sou
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Ebonessa In reply to vollmond [2006-08-28 18:59:27 +0000 UTC]
Kai emena mou elleipsan ta super anevastika comments sou!!!
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gelal [2006-08-23 22:57:06 +0000 UTC]
Very demure, dark and powerful. The visualization gets semi-lost in the tactile experience.
A definate favorite. Thankee sai.
Long days, pleasant nights.
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Ebonessa In reply to gelal [2006-08-24 16:15:59 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the great comment and the fav
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gelal In reply to Ebonessa [2006-08-24 17:22:19 +0000 UTC]
You are very welcome.
We were well met along the path.
Long days, pleasant nights
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Egir [2006-08-23 16:56:01 +0000 UTC]
Yes, tha inspiration is a tricky bitch - comes and goes as she damn pleases!!!
I like the visualisation of senses and forms you make use of: the altar of sin, the wet guilt...
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Ebonessa In reply to Egir [2006-08-23 17:02:35 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the sweetie! And for the gorgeous comments you give every time!
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Rikochet [2006-08-23 07:04:10 +0000 UTC]
Ο τίτλος του το περιγράφει άψογα. Heat. Πολύ όμορφες λέξεις, η ίδια dreamy ατμόσφαιρα (που όμως τώρα σε... καίει, δεν σε ταξιδεύει, καλή ροή (ακόμα και για ένα τόσο μικρό κείμενο
, δεν βρίσκω τίποτα που να χρήζει διόρθωσης.
A sun that never sets burns on.
New light is this river's dawn.
When to speak of a word so old
is to relearn what is known.
A time to think back and move on.
Rebuild the loves of lives long gone.
The blood that flows through me is not my own.
The blood is from the past, not my own.
The blood that leads my life is not my own.
The blood is strength, I'm not alone.
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Sombermuse [2006-08-23 02:31:47 +0000 UTC]
wow..... the imagery in this just grabbed me by my head and shook me.... beautiful work!
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Ebonessa In reply to Sombermuse [2006-08-23 15:00:07 +0000 UTC]
Thank you thank you thank you!
To read your comments really puts a smile on my face!
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Sombermuse In reply to Ebonessa [2006-09-03 02:47:20 +0000 UTC]
i am glad to make you smile!
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life-persists [2006-08-23 00:37:36 +0000 UTC]
apextes eikones ma deinis...pragmatika polli kali douleia..k polli orea perigrafi..
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Ebonessa In reply to life-persists [2006-08-23 15:02:29 +0000 UTC]
Se efxaristw polu! To xarika pou to egrapsa...
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Sub3r3 [2006-08-22 21:37:56 +0000 UTC]
E3airetikh roh, omorfes eikones kai sunais8hma..
Keep it up.
(kai mou aresei pou ekanes megales protaseis)
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Ebonessa In reply to Sub3r3 [2006-08-23 15:11:00 +0000 UTC]
Well oi megales protaseis einai to sima katatethen mou!
Xairomai pou sou arese!
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Deligaris [2006-08-22 19:42:56 +0000 UTC]
I love the scenery and the way you describe things...
Very inspiring poem indeed honey!
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Ebonessa In reply to Deligaris [2006-08-22 19:59:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for helping me through this and for always making the first comment...
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