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Ebonycloud-Graphics — TNC Chapter 3 Pg 30
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Published: 2011-04-04 05:40:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 14468; Favourites: 194; Downloads: 42
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Well if you haven't noticed there are going to be just a few changes to the style of how the pages are done ^^ I am now going to be bordering each page with a black outline to make it look snazzier ;D I also changed to font once again ^^ I hope this one works out. I hope you enjoy this page!P.S. Who else thinks that if Ratstar had been an elder and Pheo had been an elder at the same time they would do nothing but bicker and try to out do each other on who could be more sarcastic?
P.S.S. *singsong voice* When your body grows bigger, your mind must flower. It's great to learn, CAUSE KNOWLEDGE IS POWER! (School house rock was awesome ^^")
Duskstar looked sideways with sorrow in her eyes, "We are relying on you to help us set things right."
Phoenixstep's brows furrowed slightly, "Is this what you meant by 'Time to move'?"
"Do you think you would be here if we had succeeded?" Ratstar snapped at the young medicine cat. Phoenixstep only replied with a snort. "Phoenixstep, we are showing you this so you may understand."
The ginger cat flattened his ears and snarled, "Let me guess, knowledge is power?"
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Ok, you need to stop putting flashbacks in flashbacks.
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Putting flashbacks in to flashbacks? That really isn't the case here ^^" Its just Phoenixstep, Ratstar and Duskstar (in the present) looking in to a pool of water that reveals the past. So there really is only one flashback ^^
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There was a flashback during the flackback of the Starclan thing. I got lost after the Swanfeather attack. You put in too many twists!!!
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Um... The first flashback happened in chapter 2 where Ghostclaw was talking about his parents. The second flashback starts at the beginning of chapter 3. When Duskstar and Ratstar are talking it happens at the same time that Wolfpaw and his fellow apprentices are off hunting. It was all the same flashback, there was no flashback within a flashback ^^"
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Its all was mixed up together for me... and wtf? Novel form? WTFIDONTEVEN. I loved the comic form! Now I just flip through for the cat pics.
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Well, that's going to leave you fairly lost ^^
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Yeah, but I loved teh comic form!
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Well, you'll be glad to hear that I went back to comic style in chapter 5 ^^ However, that does mean you have to go back and ready the narrative version of chapter 4.
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Yay! I will be sure to read!
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I happen to like him XD
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I just noticed this, but in the second panel, Phoenixstep's hair is on one side, and then in the last panel, it's on the other.
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Its hard to tell from anyone else's perspective but the hair that falls toward his nose is actually supposed to stick out forward whilst he has two sideburns. However when drawing this it becomes hard to do so that is why the bangs in front slip from side to side ;D
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Now I see
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Pheo Pheo! Pheo! -stares at drawing- He's such a cute character X3 I think that if I saw him on the side of the road all alone I'd just HAVE to pick him up and pet him... though I think he'd claw my eyes out, I still would HAVE to do it lol. Great pages once again I like it a lot, and yes, they would bicker ALL the time
P.S.: *sings* Conjunction junction, what's your function X3 (I loved school house rock)
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I'm not saying the black outline a bad idea, but I kinda like the older outline better because you'll be able to see more background in the story. Also, the speech bubbles older style suits me better. But other wise, I really like how Phoenixstep, and Ratstar snapped at each other. But what do they mean by, "time to move"?
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Well, you do get a bit more background but not by much. As for the speech bubbles, I haven't changed those at all. The only thing I changed was the font of the text ^^ I kept the speech bubbles the exact same ;D
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Well that makes sence(sort of), but still, what do they mean by "time to move"?! I'm sure everyone else figured it out, but I haven't!
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We still don't know what she meant by it seeing as we never saw what it is she went to do ^^ However from what Pheo and Ratstar were talking about, whatever it was she went to do didn't work ^^
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Well I kept wondering what they meant by "time to move", when I'd remembered she said that in pg.24. And something tells me she wasn't to save Owlpaw's death from Reaper..... Poor Wolfpatch, he's blaming himself for her death......
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Are you not doing the hair showing the eye underneath thing anymore?
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Oh I am ^^ But in those particular frames, the second eye would have looked weird and less dramatic X3 So, yeah... Still keeping the stupid idea of see-through hair XD
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They would skip bickering and get straight to unsheathing claws.
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rockin and a rollin splishin and a splashin over the horizion what can it be? thats my fav schoo house rock songXDD
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Oh my gosh! I love that one! One my my favorites is the "Exclamations" song XD
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Omg love that!:3 and i love the new changes btww
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The text looks awesome. Anyway, I love the new page Ebbs
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awesome art
is this a flashbak? because it would make NO sense if he was just there randomly :3
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No ;D At the beginning of the chapter it was a flashback but now we are resuming the story where we left off at the end of chapter 2 ^^
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I love pheo's face in the last panel... And yes, I think that they would argue until the end of time
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I just noticed something. Is Ratstar your watermark? I see the hair similarity ^^
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Actually the watermark is my black cat character named Ebonycloud ^^ However, Ratstar is in my avatar ;D
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oh I just saw the two little points at the top and and he has those two little spikes. ^^'
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I thourght that was greystripe XD
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Nope ^^ His name is Ratstar ;D
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x3 He isnt as smexy as wolfpatch tho >_<
Also I was wondering do you wana be DA friends or sisters or something x3 You don't have to say yes x) im ok if you say no I was just wondering
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I don't quite know what it means to be dA sisters but I will be your friend if you like ^^ I don't mind ;D
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;D dA sisters are the same as friends I guess x3
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god, he's hot *drools*
Yay, phoenixstep!!!!!!!!!!
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