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echo-in-the-ether — Victorian (commission)

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Published: 2019-06-11 12:51:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 330; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 0
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Description Characters: Victorian
Characters belong to the: Tommy
Materials: tablet WACOM INTUOS MANGA, Paint Tool Sai v.1.1.0
Time: about 4 hours
Speedpaint: -

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Comments: 9

RasheruSuzie [2019-07-06 20:45:00 +0000 UTC]

Hello from ProjectComment ! ^^

 

That’s definitely a cool painting, and to me the face is the strongest part: the angle is interesting, and while the expression is fairly subtle, you can still feel a grin on the face. I really like the brush strokes used throughout, as they work well for fur.

 

I think the shading is fairly good but I would have a few suggestions to maybe enhance it. To start, I think the balance of green light and orange light is too even. Keeping the green light close to what it is now, I’d reduce the orange light to make it more of a rim light and keeping the back of the character darker. It would create more contrast.

 

You could also have the shadows a bit reddish to match with the orange back light and avoid having too many grey tones. It looks fine close up in my opinion, but you end up with a neutral grey-looking character looking at the thumbnail, which isn’t very eye-catching.

 

Last suggestion would be to add just a thing or two to the background. It’s already quite nice to have a table and drink so as to establish the setting of the scene, but the back wall looks a little bit empty, which really is an easy fix. Find a few photos of bars and pubs, see what’s on their walls, choose one thing and draw that in haha.

 

Anyway, I think it’s a very well-painted illustration overall. I especially enjoy the face and the brushwork. It looks like a pretty tough character to draw, too! xD

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echo-in-the-ether In reply to RasheruSuzie [2019-07-07 10:57:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your opinion!  

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JustALittleAmerican [2019-07-01 01:01:59 +0000 UTC]

The lighting is really good in this drawing.
And the shading is well thought out, even if in some places it looks a little strange, like on the ears.

Speaking of the ears, I don't think they're placed quite right on the head. It looks like they're way back.
Not to the sides.

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echo-in-the-ether In reply to JustALittleAmerican [2019-07-01 10:38:11 +0000 UTC]

It's my first time when I tryied to make lights like that, so I'm happy that you like them.  
Ears always make me lot of troubels. Thanks, I'll try to make improve with them. Some reference photos should be helpful.  

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JustALittleAmerican In reply to echo-in-the-ether [2019-07-02 05:47:36 +0000 UTC]

Ears are so hard to draw!
Well- human ears are my problem.
But I can see your problem too.

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SoulCharizard [2019-06-29 09:43:37 +0000 UTC]

Nice lighting to this.

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echo-in-the-ether In reply to SoulCharizard [2019-06-29 12:01:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you  

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yadahik [2019-06-11 12:52:48 +0000 UTC]

incredible! I adore how you've painted this

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echo-in-the-ether In reply to yadahik [2019-06-11 13:12:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!  

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