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Description I finally revamped one of my first babies! 

NAME
Abigail Miller   pron: AE - b uh - g AI l m IH l er

AGE
17

NICKNAME
Abby, Plastic, Plastic Heart

BIRTHDAY
October 10th

ZODIAC
Libra

OCCUPATION
unemployed/proxy

SPECIES
human/proxy

GENDER
cisgender female

SEXUALITY
lesbian

SIGNIFICANT OTHER
Kate The Chaser

FAMILY
Marie Miller // Mother
Richard Miller // Father (deceased)
Joshua Miller // Brother
Andy Douglas // Adoptive Proxy Brother

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
  Abby is 5 ft 6 with a thin frame. Her complexion is pale, she has bags under her eyes, and she appears sickly. Her arms and legs are frequently covered in tiny cuts and bruises from being in the Slenderman's employ and living in the woods. She lost her left eye after a few months while helping her boss torment new prey.

  Abby has a small nose, large eyes, and a thin mouth. She has thin, messy hair she often wears in a ponytail and occasionally has her bangs dyed blue.

PERSONALITY
  Abby is playful and quick witted, although her sense of humor at times can be a bit mean. She's an older sister through and through; she loves to torment people she considers to be siblings with teasing and pranks. Besides this, she does know when it's time to be serious and would protect her family and friends at any cost. She has problems controlling her anger and doesn't think things through; her fight or flight is constantly set on 'fight' even if she has no chance of winning. She gets hurt often because of it.

  Despite how she may present otherwise, Abby is deeply afraid. The thought of losing her brother or her friends would be devastating to her. She hides her insecurities well. She has a hard time opening up since she was always expected to be the 'grown up' at home.

  In proxymode, like all the others, Abby will unquestioningly follow her orders. She is analytical but impatient, just like her normal self, and will often chase or frighten Slenderman's would-be victims. When not on a mission, she simply sits and stares like she's a million miles away. The other proxies have to look out for her or else she won't eat or bathe, which she has to do in her proxy state.

FANDOM
  Slenderverse

BACK STORY

Abby and her brother have a longstanding love of all things horror.

When they were little, they only had broadcast television. Their mother would watch soap operas while they played outside. They didn't mind, there was anything worth watching anyway... Except, of course, the late night programming on the weekends. That was when the local channel held its Monster Movie Marathons. The two children grew a fondness for campy b-movies, practical effects, and cryptids. They'd stay up late, sneaking out of their rooms for a glimpse of Godzilla, Mothman, or Bigfoot.

As they grew older, they consumed other horror media too. They'd raid the library for horror novels and local tales. They listened to with rapt attention to every older kid spurting urban legends. They would make frequent trips to the video store with their father. They never believed any of the stories, but they were fun to scare each other with.

Joshua gained an interest in photography as he grew older. The two of them would stage monster sightings in the woods behind their house. It was fun to make monsters from what they had around the house and try to convince people they were real. They managed to scare quite a few classmates with their efforts.

Both of them worked for months to save up the money to buy a home computer when the internet started to get popular. When they got one, it was bulky and secondhand. They thought it was perfect. It didn't take them long to find the host of urban legends on the internet, including one Mr. Slenderman. They researched these new monsters tirelessly for more photography fodder.

One day, they were staging a wendigo sighting with half a deer carcass and some coat hangers out in the woods.

One of the trees moved.

They didn't even notice it at first, trees moved in the wind all the time. They didn't notice when the branches bent like limbs. It grabbed Josh, startling them both, and a blank face ripped open into a terrifying maw. As the creature tried to put Josh's head into its mouth, Abby scrambled to free her brother. A sudden headache knocked her out when she got too close. It hadn't been a tree, it was a man in a suit. They didn't think Slenderman was real, but knowing about him drew him closer anyway.

When Abby woke up she was alone in the woods, her family's belongings scattered among the trees. She went back home but her house was empty and condemned. Sometime drew her back to the forest.

She had to find her brother.


ONGOING STORY
  Abby suffers from severe Slender Sickness; the main symptoms for her being confusion, temporary deafness, nausea, and fatigue. Since the day she was attacked, she has no idea how long it's been, how long since she last ate, her own address, or where she is. She is compelled to search the forest for her family, who she has convinced herself is lost somewhere within.

   Whenever Abby sleeps or, more accurately, collapses, she goes into proxymode. In this mode she follows Slenderman's orders along with fulfilling her body's needs in the D E A T H C A B I N with the other proxies. Her proxy self always takes pills before 'waking up' to ensure this cycle continues. Without this cycle, Abby would be dead already.

  When awake, Abby has no idea she's a proxy and has no loyalty to Slenderman. If she encounters Slenderman, she will either run away or attempt to haphazardly attack him until she passes out again.

LIKES/DISLIKES
Likes: Campy horror flicks. Cryptids. Arts and Crafts. Youtube. Soccer. Urbexing.

Dislikes: Bullies. Housework. Soap Operas. Gym Class (first period). Any sort of movie snob.

STRENGTHS/WEAKNESSES
Strengths: Bravery. Outgoingness. Caring. Integrity. Very fast/athletic.

Weaknesses: Hotheadedness. Unyielding. Doesn't think things through. Not very strong.

EXTRA
  Abby's temporary deafness manifests for 10-30 minutes after waking up from proxymode or whenever Slenderman is too close. She's unable to hear external sounds, but sounds like her own breathing, heartbeat, and swallowing are amplified. It's like being trapped in a room with negative decibels, trapped inside her own head.

  Abby only discovers she's a proxy when she finds her own mask. This is months, even years?, after the initial attack. She tries to fight Slenderman, but instead signs onto him as a proxy willingly in exchange for her family's safety.

  Abby's family were never in the forest to begin with. They're safely outside, and still looking for Abby.



Abby and art belongs to me

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Comments: 21

vanillapenniesontop [2016-01-09 03:18:19 +0000 UTC]

/sCREAMS/
OH MY GOD ABBY IS AMAZING

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Eclipse-The-Awesome In reply to vanillapenniesontop [2016-01-09 03:22:26 +0000 UTC]

/SCREAMS BACK/

THANK YOU SO MUCH, I'M GLAD YOU LIKE HER!

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vanillapenniesontop In reply to Eclipse-The-Awesome [2016-01-09 03:23:46 +0000 UTC]

YESSsSsSs

if you had to ship her with anyone, who would it be?

[evil laughter]

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Eclipse-The-Awesome In reply to vanillapenniesontop [2016-01-09 03:30:51 +0000 UTC]

omg, I don't know?

When I originally conceived her, I shipped her with Masky but Masky is like, 30, and she's 17. So that's kinda weird. Maybe another girl pasta/proxy? Like Kate the Chaser? 

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vanillapenniesontop In reply to Eclipse-The-Awesome [2016-01-09 05:10:18 +0000 UTC]

omg yessss

[abate] abby x kate

thank you for making my life complete

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Eclipse-The-Awesome In reply to vanillapenniesontop [2016-01-09 05:12:05 +0000 UTC]

!!! SCREAMING @ ABATE

I'm so happy you're so passionate about my OC! How did you find her, anyway? 

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vanillapenniesontop In reply to Eclipse-The-Awesome [2016-01-09 05:45:36 +0000 UTC]

i just looked up 'rly good cp ocs'

aND BOOM

THERE SHE WAS

pls make abate fanart pls

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Eclipse-The-Awesome In reply to vanillapenniesontop [2016-01-09 05:48:06 +0000 UTC]

SCREEEEE! omg tho, thank you!

I will certainly try omg

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vanillapenniesontop In reply to Eclipse-The-Awesome [2016-01-09 06:10:38 +0000 UTC]

oMG THANK YOU

[hApPy dOLPhin nOISEs]

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Eclipse-The-Awesome In reply to vanillapenniesontop [2016-01-09 06:35:49 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, haha!

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Yukiko-Kun [2015-11-27 15:04:19 +0000 UTC]

Haro, dear, I'm here in the name of ProjectComment !
I really like your style and don't have any particular tips on the anatomy, it looks good and cartoony, too, very fun! The only thing I'd advise on is to make the shadows more prominent. I could hardly tell there were any, which makes the drawing quite flat. If that's what you were looking for, that's cool, but if you wanted to make the whole thing more 3D, then you probably should make them a bit darker at some parts.
Hope it helps!

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Eclipse-The-Awesome In reply to Yukiko-Kun [2015-11-27 21:03:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your comment! Yeah, people have been telling me to deepen my shading.

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Yukiko-Kun In reply to Eclipse-The-Awesome [2015-11-30 13:27:07 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome, dear! <3

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VioletteShadow [2015-11-27 09:01:05 +0000 UTC]

I'm also from  

My favorite part of this piece is how it all blends together. Your lines are clean and your style all the same. The style used in this is simple enough to get the point across, yet there are details that put a story to it like scars.

One thing I did not like however, is the lack of depth in this picture. That is to say, it looks like I'm looking at a completely flat person. An easy way to fix this is to add more shading to the places farthest away from the light. Perhaps a 2 cell shading on her legs for example. It looks like it is flat all the way across. If you place a shade deeper where on the leg farther back it will look like the legs are actually seperate limbs instead of one. 

Although I found something that bothers me personally I'd like to remind you that everyone has their own style, tastes, and interests. What may not appeal to me might be a masterpiece to another. You decide what you like to do in the end.

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Eclipse-The-Awesome In reply to VioletteShadow [2015-11-27 09:02:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your comment and support! 

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VioletteShadow In reply to Eclipse-The-Awesome [2015-11-27 09:10:03 +0000 UTC]

anytime

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Kaotic-Cass [2015-11-26 04:35:05 +0000 UTC]

Hello, I'm here from ProjectComment .

I don't know the Slenderverse incredibly well, but I have friends who know it better and have talked to me about. But because I don't know it well enough, I won't comment on the background on the character. I'll just stick to the things I know fairly well, which is art.

Overall, I really like this design. Your style isn't overly complex and looks really nice. You've put some time into developing it, I can tell. Your coloring is also really smooth and concrete. A good thing to be able to accomplish. Nice work.

A bit of advice I'd like to give though, is to maybe take your drawing to the next step. Add deeper, and darker shading on her skin and clothing. Think how the light plays on someone's face in real life. There are both lighter and darker shadows depending on where the light source is. And even though your style is simple (which is a good thing - I'm not insulting it) I'd add a couple more wrinkles to her clothing. Not the shirt, you did incredibly well there, but I would to the jacket and shorts, to help create the illusion that the clothes are wrapping around her body.

There's only two other things I'd like to mention, one is I'd make the eye patch either more of an earthy color (like band-aids but not as dark) so that we can see that it's an eye patch easier. Before I pulled this up from the thumbnail, it just looked like a white spot on the page - almost like it wasn't there. The other thing I would like to bring up is along the same lines, the scratches are hard to tell they are there until you pull it up and really look at it.

Anyway, I hoped this helped. You have a really awesome style and your really good at what you do. Keep it up.

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Eclipse-The-Awesome In reply to Kaotic-Cass [2015-11-26 04:39:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for your comment!

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Kaotic-Cass In reply to Eclipse-The-Awesome [2015-11-26 04:46:46 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome.

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Ringtailed-Loser [2015-11-16 19:59:25 +0000 UTC]

ABBY ARE YOU OKAY, ABBY ARE YOU OKAY, ARE YOU OKAY ABBY?

YOU'VE BEEN HIT BY

YOU'VE BEEN HIT BY

A SMOOOOTH CRIMINAL


I'm so happy you revised her!

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Eclipse-The-Awesome In reply to Ringtailed-Loser [2015-11-16 20:03:43 +0000 UTC]

OH MY GOSH


AAAA, THANK YOU. Yeah, I'm glad to. Her old story was god awful. 

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