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Published: 2005-11-15 02:46:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 932; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 125
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Well, seeing as how my character Kaze is failing to make much attention, I thought I might as well submit this.Seeing how depressing my feedback is (not to put down any of my great fans I have) I don't think the loss of my scanner will be that much of a loss. I mean, my main friend on DA doesn't talk to me. My idol artist doesn't talk to me. Then, my low popularity is depressing. With all my money being drained into attempting college, I don't think I'll me my scanner.
Especially since my once close friend is so secluded from me at her own will.
Venasis (c) me
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wow. thats one wickid creature. i love the tail especially and the rough texture of the fur.
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You would probably like the newer version I thought up, but I don't think I'll ever get around to drawing it.
To bad, sorry. XD
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yeah, time is always an issue for me too! i have so many ideas tht i've been meaning to do for 2 years!
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It's a bit hard to tell detail in some places, the mouth especially. I find it difficult to tell just what's what. The drawing itself is simply amazing (especially compared to mine).
Depression isn't fun.
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She has three mouths actually (four if you include the lower head's). The fan mouth (helps to latch onto victim), prime mouth (biting, ect), and tongue (shaft) mouth (for spraying acid, penatration, and injection).
Lets just say I wrote about her before I drew her, so I had a tough time condensing this.
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That's really impressive. Extremely detailed, and very thorough. My characters don't tend to be so complicated (as my sad, sad art shows T_T), so for yours to be so complex is very impressive (I used the word twice! Goodness me!). It rather reminds me of how they designed the Behemoth in Hellboy.
Is this a character in a story, perchance?
.......and what sort of creatures does this beast eat, to need so many mouths with so many functions? O.o;;
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Well, I'll give you a little insight on Venasis. (I'm not familiar with this "hellboy") Venasis, like all synthesis class bio-weapons. Basically, all the "normal" body functions that would be found in nature for creatures similar to these, are redesigned and weaponize. None have a race that they would be apart of. Venasis is a vicious antagonist to my three main characters, including the one that is suppose to be on her side.
As for eating (this applies to all of them), they possess a metabolic conversion system dubbed matter/energy/matter converstion process. Literally, if a substance isn't too tough to get into their bodies, they can eat anything they choose. Now they still have taste buds and that oftem causes them to reframe from .... say, eating a big hunk of metal.
Venasis is purely ment for melee and short range combate. Well, I hope I said all that right...
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Hellboy is a movie. In it there's a large creature that's got three mouths that each serve a different purpose. This creature is called Behemoth and looks like a giant squid, sort of.
I designed a character named Kantama (I made up his name and liked it so much I began using it myself) who's something like that in regards to what he eats. He eats metal. I'm not sure if it's because he likes it or because that's all he can eat (haven't put too much thought into it, sadly), but Kantama will eat your car if you don't keep a close eye on him.
Hrm... well Venasis' tail could count as a long-range weapon, couldn't it? It is rather lengthy, after all. Just a thought.
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It could be sort of... but in this kind of war that she is involved in, physical combat is rather ineffective. So I think is more suiting to be for "melee".
Thanx for comment.
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A melee is a fight, skirmish, so on. Therefore wouldn't melee refer to physical comment by default? Just what sort of combat is effective in the war this creature takes part in?
No problem.
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Sorry, I get my definitions confused. Umm, well, she enjoys impaling, asundering, disolving, burning foes from the inside out, and a lot of other unpleasent acts.
Well, Kaze Kitty, being an assasin, carries what I've called, a Nanominiturizationable Railgun (it can compress itself small enough that she can put it in the false bottoms of her platforms). A weapon like the this has at least 95% accuracy up to about 1 1/2 miles. She alone could easily pick off Venasis before she gets close enough. Then you have air craft, bunker busters, and blah blah blah. However, Venasis is put in charge of a military battle that turns into the bloodiest massacre in the entire war (long story in itself).
Now to finally answer your question 
Umm... I think I lost myself...
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Well, that still counts as a form of physical combat. She makes physical contact in her attacks.
First off, you seem to have put a lot of thought into this. I take it that this is part of a story you're writing, or something of that sort? But you're giving me far too much detail about something I'm clueless about. I don't know the plot, characters, or setting of whatever story this is, so I'm pretty much lost. Also, you seem to contradict yourself a bit. Venasis seems meant for close-range combat, yet you're saying she can be picked off by random enemies once within range? If that were the case, then it'd be better for her to be more focused on long-range attacks, though she can't help how she's made.
You lost both of us. X3 At least you've put a fair amount of thought into this!
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Hmm... maybe I should send you a chapter that has Venasis in it... but then again, you still wouldn't get it.
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Your story must be extremely complex!
I ought to send you a chapter of one of _my_ stories, so you'd be as clueless as I am! X3
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Sorry, I wouldn't have the time to read it. =\
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My scanner doesn't work either. There are two scanners in the house, but mine is the biggest one. That, and the second scanner doesn't work either. Still, from the description you sound so sad. There's nothing wrong with going to college and all. That sounds good, actually. Losing your friend, though, that can be sad. I don't know what to say.
This picture really wows me. It's so grosteque, yet it has a feel of nobility to it. I like how you did the shine on the spines and the claws. Some parts look a bit unnatural, like the extra head and mouths, but that seems intentional, so yeah.
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It was and still is a devastating loss.
I got the second head idea from a monster in Legaia 2. I will probably have to do an internal diagram of her. After all, the matter to energy to matter metabolic process (found in all of the -sis series bio-weapons) simplifies the interal stuff considerably. So the anatomies tend to be much different...
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Venasis is one of my faveorite creatures that u made
one question...r those wings on his back, or what?
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They are actually "exhaust" tails to spraying combustable materials including napalm.
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Neat to here your excitement on this. I'm rather pleased with this too. I don't care what others say about it.
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Why, have others critized you on this? Hmm... if they did, they deserve a butt-whooping.
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Aww... 
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Excellient shading! I really like the design. ^_^ The anatomy looks fabulous!
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Thanx, its nice to see a new face around here.
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That is a truly spectacular picture! The shading is just perfect and the detail is soooooo just wow! You truly are an amazing artist!
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Great pic! I love the dark and evil feel to this char
Especially like the tail =^_^=
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well many of my favorite artists are underrated in my opnion, eventually if you keep pumping out the pictures people will see your art more and more^ ^
oh and the picture kicks tushie!
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Wow! 
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Nice to see you come and comment. Thanx.
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Well, I for one think you should keep the scanner hooked up, as you are such a talented artist, and your art needs to be out there. Hang in there! You are wonderfully talented.
~SnoCat
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I would keep it hooked up if it would fricken work. Blast that darn thing.
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Oh, I can relate!!! Kill the scanner!!! (grin)
It can be sooo frustrating sometimes.
~SnoCat
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Look out! You might get impaled!
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The tail is awesome. I wasn't expecting another head randomly popping out near the neck as a mutation- but great things can happen when you have a lot of emotion. The fur fits it, too, very wild, a deviation from the normal soft fur you make.
Sorry I can't give any adv. crits. But, why let your popularity bring you down? 
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Thank you.... Thank you very much for that comment. I often forget the time differences in my circumstances. Thank you Zeh, for reminding me of that. Your comments have always tended to be up building to me. Thank you for reminding me that their are still others out there that are interested in my affairs.
I can't thank yah enough.
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Heh, you're welcome, I didn't know it would mean so much.
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Sweet! That's really incredable 
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