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ECs-Overlord — The creation of Sparkshot
Published: 2013-05-16 13:09:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 427; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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It usually is a peaceful environment aboard The Nemesis but today was different."What is that noise, Starscream?" Growled Megatron, clasping his servos over his audios. "Make it STOP!"
The noise that Megatron was referring to was the cries and screams of a femme, it seemed, in anguish.
"It is the sound of my daughter's mate in labour, Mighty Megatron." Starscream replied, smirking at the pain it caused his lord and leader.
In the Med Bay,ScrapYard grasped Charcoal's servo tightly as Charcoal was sparking their daughter.
"Nearly there, Sweetie, come on you can do it. Push!" She encouraged her mate.
Charcoal gritted her dentia tightly. "I.....can't....."
Knock Out, who was monitoring the well being of both Mother and Child on the Med Bay screens, turned to both of them.
"Charcoal, come on, dear, you are a toughie. I know you can do it." He smiled. "Just a little bit more."
Charcoal screamed out as she pushed, the Sparkling's head could be clearly seen protruding from between Charcoal's crotch plating. ScrapYard let go of Charcoal's servo and moved round to the front of the berth, gently taking her own Sparkling's head and gently pulling out the child as Charcoal pushed.
Charcoal screamed in pain and in a matter of minutes, the Sparkling was bawling in LifeLine's arms.
"It's a femme, sweet spark." She smiled. Charcoal looked over at the child, weakly.
"I think.....we will call her.....Sparkshot." Charcoal gave a weak little smile before collapsing into Stasis Lock. Knock Out walked over to Charcoal and scanned her.
"Daddy? What's wrong with her?" ScrapYard asked.
"Nothing to be worried about, m'dear, she's exhausted her Energon. Charcoal is alive, just weak from the Sparking. I'll hook her up to an Energon Drip, in just a few days, she'll be herself again. Now let's take care of the young one." Knock Out replied, fixing his red optics on the youngling.
"Daddy, she's mine. I wish to make the necessary checks myself! Go and make sure Charcy is ok." ScrapYard told the older Medic, giving him a stern look before performing vital system checks on her daughter. "She's alright.....and beautiful. My dear little Sparkshot......"
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Comments: 2
This is a good concept, but I found it a little hard to follow I'm afraid m'dear ^^
I get that it's ScrapYard and Charcoals daughter being born, but you kind of introduced characters a little bluntly, at first I thought it was just KO, Scrap and Charcoal in the room, then you suddenly mention Lifeline?
I don't know if this is maybe part of a series and that's why I can't follow it, sorry if that is the case XD
Also the idea of ScrapYard 'pulling' on the sparklings head as it's being born it a bit unrealistic 
Descriptives, you can lengthen this out and add more atmosphere, don't be afraid of descriptives. Your ideas have so much potential, take them and run with them
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Sorry. ScrapYard's original name was LifeLine. That's a blunder on my part but this story was based on a RP I did with someone. (They played ScrapYard and I played Charcoal)
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