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EdMopySun — Run in with Ethan | TG-Fight-Club
Published: 2019-09-11 03:19:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 2332; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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This comics been in the works for over a week now, but I hurriedly finished up today since Ethan has been replaced by Femil and I didn't want it to appear too outdated. (Not that it matters all that much since this takes place further back in the timeline any way.)Anyway, this is the start of a little comic, story arc idea I had for Ed. Though, if I'm to continue, I should probably sacrifice some quality for time's sake... Things change fast in this club!
Now, since I know the words are a little small I'll provide a transcript along with some commentary in brackets, where relevant.
Page 1: [I want to provide a bit of context, this dialogue here is basically taken striaght from the Leapster game "Spongebob Saves the Day!" I played it a lot as a kid and I guess I just associate it with chemistry now.]
Panel 1: Ed: Well, if I'm stuck here I better find some way to equip myself. But how?
[I tried to make Ed's face look like the thinking emoji but it didn't work very well...]
Panel 2: TV: Impress your friends, singe your eyebrows, create horrible smells in your home. | Ed: What's this?
[You can ignore the fact that there's a TV randomly sitting on a stump in the middle of nowhere without even being plugged in...]
Panel 3: TV: It's the super, scientific "Home Chemistry Set!" Buy yours now.
Panel 4: Ed: That's it! I'll make an even better secret sauce and save the Krusty Krab!
Panel 5: Ed: Wait, that's not right. Let's see... Ah, here it is.
[Ignoring the meta joke, I actually wear glasses IRL. Crazy, right?]
Panel 6: Ed: *ahem* I'll use my scientific knowledge, make my own TG serum and show them what I can really do!
[BTW I decided to have Ed be a super smart inventor type, just to make things more interesting. He'll probably just make TG gadgets anyway.]
Panel 7: *Cricket noises*
Panel 8: I either need to find someone to talk to other than myself, or get used to being crazy.
[Occupational hazard of being a lonely protagonist.
Page 2:
Panel 1: Ed: Almost finished the mu-TG-en. All I'm missing is a TG-ing agent. Luckily, I saw some Toxicodendron Genalterus (commonly known as TG ivy) by a cave a bit ago.
[Said story arc is supposed to be about making this mu-TG-en and using it on people, demonstrating it's "unique" properties.]
Panel 2: Ed: Aha! This'll be perfect.
Panel 4: Ethan: Another threat! You better stay inside Rock Jane, this could get ugly.
[An indicator that this happened a while ago timline wise is that Ethan not only exists but is also still talking to a rock.]
Panel 3: Ethan: AAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!
Panel 4: Ethan: Wha?
[This panel was tricky to portray the motion involved. If it's not clear, Ed is casually stepping to the side, much to Ethan's surprise, causing Ethan to rush past him.]
Panel 5: Ethan: Gah!
[Again, if it's not clear Ethan is tripping over a rock and falling in the bush.]
Panel 6: Ed: Sorry? | Alo: Not as sorry as you're going be...
[Alo then proceeds to beat Ed up. THE END]
The characters Ethan and Alo belong to
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Comments: 7
This was great. The best part was the return of Rock Jane.
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~Hahaha, this was a hoot. I like the humor. Also due to your character being a toon, I didn't really find myself questioning the random tv with no power source. Cartoons can get away with not following real world logic. : P
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Yeah, you're right. It also makes expression and posing more fun.
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Bwhahaha, this is comic gold!
i like how you win without even trying
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I'm glad you liked it! I wish I had more time for full comics like this...
And yeah, my self-based characters have a tendency to be under-powered so this is nothing new.
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