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Published: 2014-01-09 09:06:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 607; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 0
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love the color scheme! and i think this chibi the looks like me ^______^
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ahhh very cute chibi ~~~~Β
i love the way you did the skirt ! but some things look a little off ;;
first,, it would be better if you put her left pupil more to the >>> side. Now it looks like she's staring at something else and it would be better if she was staring at the viewer (unless you plan to add some background/interaction with something else)
second, her right arm is a tad too long. If you include the length of her hand too, it would about pass her knees already.
third; her right ear shouldnt be so visible. With her bangs there, it shouldnt be visible because her face is facing sideways and not front
hope it helps !Β
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AHHH thank you so much for catching those! i really wouldn't have noticed!
but i'm a little confused as to which right/which left you're referring to OTL
like do you mean her right or?Β
i assume for the arm you mean the one with the hand showing, and the ear on theΒ same side
since her head is tilted
but i'm not sure which eye you're referring to! OTL OTL /blind
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sorry if i confuse you aahhh;; XDD
i meant the character's left eye should be more to the viewer's right side;Β
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no it's not you, i'm just dumb XDD
and gotcha!! i fixed the arm and the eye and erased the ear.
hopefully I've got it right OTL OTL
thank you so much for your help!! <333
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ahhh dont say that ;;Β
i just saw it! it looks a whole lot better and i like how you brightened it up <33
hehe no probs ^o^
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