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Published: 2018-10-14 18:44:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 1133; Favourites: 114; Downloads: 15
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Model: Goth 5
Sky: Sky 21
Background:Β Field Collection: Cornflower
Petals: www.deviantart.com/texelgirl-sβ¦
Birds: Flock of Birds- Pelicans PSD File
Hair:www.deviantart.com/raynemorgan
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Comments: 39
Overall, brilliant. The tone is consistent, you've gone for a 'duller' mood (dusk?_ which works really well. Palette choice is perfect - the colours compliment each other beautifully. The images you've used work really well, and you've managed to the grass that is visible against her dress to come through really well. Cropping out an image like that can be difficult and frustrating, excellent job.
Only negative is perhaps her hair - it is very blurred at the edges suggesting strong winds, while the petals and grass suggest a lighter breeze (not much blurring in the grass suggests isn't moving, and the petals are clear indicating slower movement). However, I only noticed this on close inspection, as I was looking specifically for the critique, so to the usual level of observer it would more than pass the standard needed I'd say.
As I say, I really like this artwork, and am very impressed with the techniques and effort that has gone in.
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Thanks for your critic... I love it...The negative aspect of the criticism that you have made for me is what makes me improve my art and
be better every day
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You are very welcome. That's exactly the point of a critique though, to point out what is good and what can be improved so that you can see both how far you've come and where you still have to go. If you got it perfect, then you are ready for something more challenging. Former teacher here - if it's perfect for the level I'm assessing, I'll raise the bar until there is something to improve, without being overly harsh or difficult. You're setting a high bar though!Β
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You are mostΒ welcome!
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Genial MJ, me encanta!!Β Β Β Β Β
Ahora me he dado cuenta que eres tu por este trabajo. Un besazo!!
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Gracias tocaya...tus trabajos son impresionates
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Love the color and moving hair. This is beautiful!Β Β
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Thanks for your words Β
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