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Published: 2013-04-15 04:24:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 2899; Favourites: 80; Downloads: 0
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Description The orchids shivered
to the sound of
raw fingers on
your old guitar,
smell of tarnish, metal
and un-calloused skin -

the only songs you know
are your father's
lullabies and a
Christian rock band's
greatest hit,
four cords strong.

Played on hot weekends
with the windows open,
twelve years old again,
fat against the waistband
of Walmart jeans
and straw hair stuck
to your forehead
in humid summer air.

I can't feel you here,
in the apartment,
know you're twelve years back
in time,
in a different town,
with no stubble on your chin.
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Comments: 17

AyeAye12 [2014-01-24 15:49:24 +0000 UTC]

Hot sweet yes damn yes hot sweet.


Pretty much. Fantastic stuff, definitely deserving of a DD. 

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built1963 [2014-01-24 05:02:56 +0000 UTC]

Now that is poetry.

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juls0077 [2014-01-24 02:00:23 +0000 UTC]

mmm k you are awesome. I have not read a modern poem worth anything until now. Pop Poetry lets bring it back! I write poetry but have never had the courage to make any public. I love it great job!

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TruthisTruth [2014-01-23 22:13:42 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations on your Daily Deviation!

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1jackson234 [2014-01-23 21:55:53 +0000 UTC]

Spellbound

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ShadowedAcolyte [2014-01-23 21:20:31 +0000 UTC]

I enjoyed reading and rereading this, getting a bit lost in its sense of time. Well done. Thanks for sharing.

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Lintu47 [2014-01-23 15:24:14 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD!
Have a nice day!

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robson666 [2014-01-23 10:59:48 +0000 UTC]

congratulations to the well deserved Daily Deviation

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nosedivve [2014-01-23 08:25:27 +0000 UTC]

Ccongrats on the well deserved DD!

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indaluna [2013-05-19 16:41:12 +0000 UTC]

this evokes such a strong sense of place
i love ittt

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archelyxs [2013-04-28 22:30:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm really glad to see new writing from you.

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DamagedHomewrecker [2013-04-24 23:41:44 +0000 UTC]

i love the imagery. just beautiful.

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ohsostarryeyed [2013-04-21 19:41:16 +0000 UTC]

"The orchids shivered"

totally sucked me in immediately! i miss your work (and tumblr!) exponentially, kelsey

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YouInventedMe [2013-04-15 17:27:28 +0000 UTC]

great to see something new from you!

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ejectionletter In reply to YouInventedMe [2013-04-15 18:24:21 +0000 UTC]

thank you. trying so hard to get inspired

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vespera [2013-04-15 14:34:53 +0000 UTC]

*strong. Now that's just funny


I really like this one

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vespera [2013-04-15 14:34:34 +0000 UTC]

*four chords stron

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