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Published: 2013-04-04 16:36:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 529; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 0
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So, I decided to remake the flying sprite for BB. c: In total it's 6 frames, made with Paint Tool SAI and Photoshop Elements 9.I love this one compared to the older one. ;w;
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blazingfires13 [2013-04-04 17:14:47 +0000 UTC]
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This bird is great! I love how clean and clear the animation is in the motion of the wings. I also like how the feet and til slightly move, as if the bird is ready to take off. It is really cute, and the shade of red lookserfect. The black to show the other wing is nice, but it almost looks as if the bird has a red and black wing. I have not seen anything like this, and I really do like it. It has some good originality and it is not in my favorites! Hope you enjoyed my critique!
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ekoru In reply to blazingfires13 [2013-04-04 20:20:13 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the critique! c:
I tried my best to make it smooth enough, since quite a lot of bird flight animations only consist of 3 - 4 frames. :S
I tried my best to make it as cute as possible, too! I'm glad it paid off.
I may change the back wing in future, as it does look a little off.
And again, thanks for the critique! ^^
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blazingfires13 In reply to ekoru [2013-04-04 20:23:15 +0000 UTC]
No problem, it looks awesome and you definitely know what you are doing!
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angeoux [2013-04-04 16:46:01 +0000 UTC]
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I really like this! Comparing to your old one, it looks really cool!
Though... I'd say a few things, first of all,
If you see bird flight, you can notice their feet don't move, they stay tucked in, they only move them if they are carying something with feet or going to land.
I love how you re-positioned the head and tail. Though, in my oppinion, if you want it to look more realistic, the colors should be less saturated (like, not that completely red thing.
And, the lineart looks kind of strange, part of it is blurry, the wing's lineart isn't blury at all. I found that strange.
But anyway. Whatever, that's just my oppinion...
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ekoru In reply to angeoux [2013-04-04 20:17:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the critique.
I am aware of the blurry and none-blurry parts, as I did them separately. :S
I wasn't really aiming for realistic flight or colours, but more of a cartoon-like style. And as what may be added to the game, the birds will hold things in their feet. (For example, swords you can buy in the shop, etc.)
And I may make the colours less saturated in future. c:
Again, thank you! ^^
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angeoux In reply to ekoru [2013-04-05 15:49:03 +0000 UTC]
No problem
Oh. I understand... hehehe
No problem!
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ekoru In reply to robbelineil [2014-02-17 12:39:08 +0000 UTC]
Sorry, no since it's for my own game. If you like I could possibly make something similar for you?
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Bowtiefoxin [2013-04-05 05:42:34 +0000 UTC]
This a huge improvement form your old one X3 Are you any closer to getting the site running, or do you still need coders?
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ekoru In reply to Bowtiefoxin [2013-04-05 09:45:24 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! c:
I still need coders. ;; /sigh.
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ekoru In reply to thefluffyhandgrenade [2013-04-04 20:13:21 +0000 UTC]
xD Gotta love those flaps~
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thefluffyhandgrenade In reply to ekoru [2013-04-05 15:17:58 +0000 UTC]
oh yup I gotta love those flaps
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