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Elafacwen09 — Fly With Me
Published: 2010-05-01 21:06:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 108; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Originally I was going to name this deviation Failasus (fail+pegasus) Because it was a fail compared to my original expectations of the said drawing....But it turned out half-way decent, so I posted it anyways in hopes SOMEONE will tell me how to make it....better. I honestly don't know what else to do with it >_<
The scan looks weird cuz' I took it with my camera....
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Your Pegasus looks cute, probably because he has a pony morphology (I love their rounded stomach). That's what makes him original.
However, I can see a few problems with proportions. The main one is the left forelimb : it is too short, and the shoulder may be a little too wide. And I think the wing should be inserted higher on it (I would have seen it more on the right too), but it is well drawn.
Except that I don't see any other problem. The grass could have been more worked, but that's not bad, it's still better than nothing.
It will probably be difficult to correct this properly on this drawing if you want to but I hope it will help you the next time.
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Anyways, that left fore leg just needs to be chopped off >_< The reference image I used showed the horse running at an angle, and I was unable to capture said angle... And here's the reference image I used [link]
Thanks so much for taking the time to critique!! It really helps me! 
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Effectively, the foreleg seems to be more on the right than usual, that's why it looks shorter.
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