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Miles and Franzy at the Airport... btw this is the Passcontrol of the Zurich Airtport (Swiss)I've passed this Place very often so.. It was time to draw it xD
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sb11 [2010-03-27 03:17:05 +0000 UTC]
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I need to write a critique on this. For reason a) I thought you wonderfully drew it and b) this is like my favorite pairing ever and they are adorable together :3
First off, this is such a cute concept. I love how you made the aeroport background, which you did awesomely! I also love the idea with Franziska's luggage, very original :3. I like how Edgeworth is hugging her and the mere little pose. It describes that time they were at the aeroport at JFA. I love how you made the shadow under Franzy's leg. It's perfectly aligned by her suit. Also, all your shadowing impressed me. I love that. All your shadow and coloring ideas :3
Suggestions? Well, I think you could have changed some parts of Edgey. His nose should be more straighter and more out-forth, but I do like how you added in your style there. His face kind of topples Franzy's hair, so it would be more nicer to adjust his profile by giving him a dimenshion and a shadow on Franzy's hair e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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But I love this so much!!!!!! Love it a bunch!
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elcah In reply to sb11 [2010-03-27 19:03:13 +0000 UTC]
OMG!!! The first critique I've ever got! *really proud*
Thank you so much, for rating my picture !!! I'm glad that you like it, because it takes much time to draw.. but you are right, edgeys nose looks a bit... wrong xD
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sb11 In reply to elcah [2010-03-27 19:14:08 +0000 UTC]
No problem! I love the concept and its my favorite pairing :3
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icejuliet314 [2015-06-12 18:37:24 +0000 UTC]
From that moment in the game i ship them.....
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LadyMeru [2011-05-04 23:47:14 +0000 UTC]
great pic. its so nice to see some one who doesn't pair edgey with phoenix. XD
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elcah In reply to LadyMeru [2011-05-05 19:47:26 +0000 UTC]
yeah, thats not a matter of course xD
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d0ggypaws [2011-02-05 13:03:29 +0000 UTC]
awww i love it! edgey x franzy is my favourite pairing ever and you don't see pictures of them both a lot on devantart! really well done
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TangentialX [2010-07-08 02:17:45 +0000 UTC]
This is SO ADORABLE. I ADORE THESE TWO TOGETHER. SO. MUCH. I really like all the detail you've put in here. : )
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elcah In reply to TangentialX [2010-07-08 14:14:05 +0000 UTC]
oh thank you xD! they are one of my favourite parining too
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Moonshadow0989 [2010-04-12 10:47:38 +0000 UTC]
Aww, so sweet.
Franzi really doesn't Edgey to go, does she?
Love that ribbon tied there, and I also your colouring style!
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elcah In reply to Moonshadow0989 [2010-04-12 16:53:22 +0000 UTC]
of cause not! Who would want that q.q?
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Moonshadow0989 In reply to elcah [2010-04-13 07:23:11 +0000 UTC]
Um...Edgey and Franzi haters?
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LadyBerii [2010-04-09 10:50:38 +0000 UTC]
Oh my, how CUTE! I like the idea with Franzis suitcase.
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enjoyahappiestlie [2010-03-28 14:26:56 +0000 UTC]
I have to agree with kitsuneyamikage.
It's very rare to see Miles x Franziska pairings here on dA.
Thanks for drawing these two together in the airport scene. They're my favorite Ace Attorney pairing, too!
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elcah In reply to enjoyahappiestlie [2010-03-28 18:28:26 +0000 UTC]
thx for your sweet comment q,q
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Eli-Miwa [2010-03-28 13:04:22 +0000 UTC]
AW LOVE ā„
My favorite pairing. You did well ā„
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kitsuneyamikage [2009-12-18 15:04:54 +0000 UTC]
Miles/Franziska pics are sooo rare!! It's lovely!!
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