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we live in a world where our lungs are black and outlined with angry streaks of red. we plant diseases and destruction in the holes of our stomachs and watch them grow – they shoot up fast and clog up our throats with ashy leaves.our fingernails are ripped, jagged edges digging into pale skin and leaving white hot lines in their wake. our wings are crumpled, feathers bent and pressing into the expanse of our backs – they're the weights on our shoulders, and there's no space left for anything else.
your tongue is cracked and so is mine. words no longer form, sounds no longer rise. dreams and wishes fall into the cracks as nightmares rush past them out into the open. that breathtaking sequel to life you were hoping for no longer exists – we are now aimless, hopeless, and craving for sin.
we swallow moons and exhale moondust; we stray from orbits and into vacuums. but all we ever wanted were the touch of lightly powdered lips against our flesh.
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Comments: 67
Oshunaria [2018-02-19 04:57:51 +0000 UTC]
I come back here all the time to read this over and over. Every time it reflects some new aspect of my life, even after all these years. Infinite love for this <3
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electrickiss In reply to Oshunaria [2018-07-30 12:19:40 +0000 UTC]
wow, thank you so much <3
and many apologies for the late reply!
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popoilo [2013-04-11 01:16:52 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. Honestly. This was the best thing in my day *-* I love this thing you do with words [link]
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electrickiss In reply to popoilo [2013-04-11 03:04:37 +0000 UTC]
omg thank you! this means a lot <333
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imaginative-lioness [2013-02-18 00:02:21 +0000 UTC]
I have featured this in my journal: [link] ♥
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electrickiss In reply to imaginative-lioness [2013-02-18 00:44:11 +0000 UTC]
oh thank you so much!
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LionesseRampant [2013-02-01 07:39:11 +0000 UTC]
Wow. The imagery in this is beautiful! Congrats on the DD! It's well deserved!
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electrickiss In reply to LionesseRampant [2013-02-02 12:46:36 +0000 UTC]
i'm so honoured you think so!
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etc-anime [2013-02-01 05:56:35 +0000 UTC]
this is amazing... it's incredibly emotional. I can't describe how amazing this is...
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electrickiss In reply to etc-anime [2013-02-02 12:46:20 +0000 UTC]
thank you omg it means a lot!
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TGIBA In reply to electrickiss [2013-02-02 16:53:28 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for sharing your work! I certainly enjoyed it. <3
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TheArtzyOwl [2013-02-01 03:25:12 +0000 UTC]
This is fantastic. I love the concluding line and how it works with the tone of the rest of the poem. Fantastic work.
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electrickiss In reply to TheArtzyOwl [2013-02-02 12:45:54 +0000 UTC]
i'm running out of ways to say thank you! but i do thank you :'D
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TheArtzyOwl In reply to electrickiss [2013-02-02 20:40:25 +0000 UTC]
Lol. You're welcome. xD
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Greenwood-Wolf In reply to electrickiss [2013-02-02 13:10:26 +0000 UTC]
Really, this thing is magical. You can almost taste the poison in the words.
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electrickiss In reply to Greenwood-Wolf [2013-02-02 13:27:41 +0000 UTC]
omg let me hug you till death (not really but you know what i mean!)
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MichaelHiyama [2013-01-31 23:50:31 +0000 UTC]
Wow what a powerful message this conveys. You write so eloquently it's beautiful.
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electrickiss In reply to MichaelHiyama [2013-02-02 12:44:56 +0000 UTC]
oh my gosh, thank you so much ;A;
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Emiko-CatOnFire [2013-01-31 22:05:30 +0000 UTC]
The imagery is great. Strong message about humanity. At least, that's what I interpret from it..
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electrickiss In reply to Emiko-CatOnFire [2013-02-02 12:39:19 +0000 UTC]
thank you! and yes, you would be right ;D
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greenleo94 [2013-01-31 16:14:17 +0000 UTC]
Wow this piece is incredibly powerful. I love your word choice! :3
Also congrats on the DD!
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electrickiss In reply to greenleo94 [2013-02-02 12:35:11 +0000 UTC]
thank you and thank you again!
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Eiolo [2013-01-31 15:57:43 +0000 UTC]
I offer you a digital hand and hug In the face of infinite irrelevance, even ash can be a beautiful miracle.
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electrickiss In reply to Eiolo [2013-02-02 12:34:40 +0000 UTC]
i return your hand and hug!
and i absolutely agree :3
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EternalFallacy [2013-01-31 14:32:42 +0000 UTC]
Amazing, congratulations on a DD! I see both of the literary DDs today are in a very cosmic
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electrickiss In reply to EternalFallacy [2013-02-02 12:33:37 +0000 UTC]
thanks so much! :')
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