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The following is a scene from my novel, "Song of the Summer King." Kindle version is available on amazon.com: [link] Or you can order a signed first edition from my website! [link]~~~
“Only a fool would stand ground against old Lapu,” a female voice said. Shard whirled, hissing, and saw no one. “I’m glad to see you aren’t a fool, Rashard son-of-the-Nightwing.”
“Show yourself!” He turned in a circle, wings half open, though he didn’t dare try to fly in the woods again. He was alone. All the other gryfons pursued the boar to the meadow. A scent washed him, musky, woodsy. Wolf. When he stood still at last and flicked only his ears he heard her, turned, and saw her.
In the woods she blended as well as a shaft of sunlight, or a shadow, or a leaf. The wolves of the Star Isle were nearly as large as gryfons – and unlike the lesser beasts that ranged the little forests of the lesser islands, they also boasted bold coloring, had names, and spoke. Her coat was a color like the red heather of summer, but those spots in the sunlight shifted color like gryfon feathers, iridescent gray and gold. She stood under the tallest of the rowan trees.
“Who are you, speak!”
She stepped forward, ears up, alert but not threatening, and she had bright amber eyes. Her hackles remained smooth, her stance passive. “I am Catori. Why do you hunt the great boar?”
“For meat,” he lied, then, thinking of Kjorn, angled his head proudly. “For the great kill, to prove our worth. For the glory of the king.” Even as he spoke he wondered why he was explaining himself to her instead of attacking, or leaving to join his fellows.
“Which king?” She stood root as a pine tree, inscrutable as the whispering birch. Shard hesitated, then lashed his tail. The wind shifted through the naked branches and pine bows and seemed to echo her in tiny voices, "Which king? Which king?"
He snapped his gaze up, but saw only branches rustling in the whispering breeze, and birds. Then he looked back to the she-wolf, narrowing his eyes.
“The only king. Sverin son-of-Per, king of the Silver Isles.”
Her nose wrinkled and she showed the sharp points of her teeth. “King of the Sun Isle, you mean. King of thieves. There is a king on the Star Isle as well, and you don’t belong here.”
Movement caught his eye and he looked up. A raven sat now in the branches above, bobbling back and forth and chuckling. Was it the same as earlier that morning? Had it tracked him, told the wolves, caused this trouble? “We belong wherever we wish. Wherever we fly. Fight me if you don’t think so.”
“I have no wish to fight you, though you trespass here, and your king has hunted my family.”
“Trespass?” Shard crouched, then forced a bold laugh, thinking of Kjorn. The Silver Isles belonged to gryfons. “As for the king, Sverin hunts wolves because you harry our hunts on Star Isle. It’s your own fault.”
“A vicious circle.” She tilted her head. “But which came first, Rashard, the mountain, or the sea?” Above, the raven guffawed and sidled on his branch, echoing her.
Shard hesitated and fluffed. Her answer made no sense -- and yet with the words came a memory, the low and thrumming voice of a male gryfon. His father’s voice?
'Which sprang first, Rashard, the mountain or the sea? Not even the eldest could tell, whether first came wave or tree.'
“Which came first?” Cried the raven, winging to another branch.
Words Shard didn’t remember learning clawed his mind and he whispered, “The silence, or the song…”
“Not even the rowan could say,” murmured Catori. “Had it a voice, and lived so long.”
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Watercolor and Pen. ^_^
...there are three wolves in this painting.
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Comments: 53
ElementalJess In reply to ??? [2016-02-24 17:09:47 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! ^_^ Thank you so much. I'm glad you're enjoying the books! I'll have the fourth and final one out this spring.
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NikitaFang In reply to ElementalJess [2016-02-25 04:44:01 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome! And I'll be sure to keep an eye out for the final book. I love fantasy novels and I'm glad that I was able to find your books!
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buddertrixierules [2015-12-28 14:41:28 +0000 UTC]
his lion part is also grey, and his tail feathers go all the way up to his rump
otherwise amazing painting for amazing book
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ElementalJess In reply to buddertrixierules [2015-12-29 00:56:46 +0000 UTC]
Well, what can I say, it's an older piece, before all details were solidified, you know. Thank you for Both compliments
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buddertrixierules In reply to ElementalJess [2016-03-05 00:59:15 +0000 UTC]
I luv this book!! Btw I'm the same person that sent u the email asking When the 4th book came out. My email was yandex. 😁😁 that picture is beautiful I luv it 😀😀😘😘
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ElementalJess In reply to buddertrixierules [2016-03-09 15:25:00 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much Yes...closing in on the edits for the book 4, and then the Kickstarter!
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dot-DOLL [2014-11-21 16:40:41 +0000 UTC]
Why have I only just descovered this? It's gorgeous!
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Draconic-Metalsmith [2013-07-07 20:09:38 +0000 UTC]
That picture just gave me a Peter rabbit nostalgia moment.
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Sleyf [2012-05-16 09:37:05 +0000 UTC]
I really want to read this now!
And hey I like that hidden wolf in the background. Your watercolour style is also really amazing, i love it!
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RDRmaster [2012-04-28 00:44:22 +0000 UTC]
i really want to read it now!!!! can u note me when its out? i don't have facebook, it keeps giving my computer viruses
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ElementalJess In reply to RDRmaster [2012-04-28 02:08:33 +0000 UTC]
Eww yuck viruses! I will definitely send you a note. Thanks so much for your interest
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HellVegeta [2012-02-02 15:15:46 +0000 UTC]
I love the well picked colors combined.Great color composition !
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jalex90 [2012-01-28 21:50:47 +0000 UTC]
me like it!!!
love the final touch with the ink! gives a sketchy look and defines more the animals and all
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ElementalJess In reply to jalex90 [2012-01-29 02:55:24 +0000 UTC]
Thank you ^.^ I wanted it to feel storybookish.
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ElementalJess In reply to CostumeJinx [2011-10-16 22:30:04 +0000 UTC]
Thank you soooo much ^_^ It's just a waiting game right now. *thumb twiddle* Must continue work on Book 2 and other projects O_O
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CostumeJinx In reply to ElementalJess [2011-10-16 22:38:43 +0000 UTC]
Waiting Game? So you've completed book 1 and sent it in? cool!
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Rakaseth [2011-10-12 15:59:56 +0000 UTC]
Very nice work, and great writing as well. I'm sure the finished manuscript will be excellent! How close are you now?
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ElementalJess In reply to Rakaseth [2011-10-12 23:13:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much ^_^ The book is finished and I'm in communication with a publisher. *fingers crossed!*
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Rakaseth In reply to ElementalJess [2011-10-12 23:47:12 +0000 UTC]
AWESOME! How soon do you think it will take until it's on the shelf/elibrary?
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ElementalJess In reply to Rakaseth [2011-10-14 11:09:07 +0000 UTC]
It's hard to say in publishing O_O I really have my fingers crossed for next spring, one way or the other.
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Rakaseth In reply to ElementalJess [2011-10-14 16:52:48 +0000 UTC]
Awesome, well congratulations in advance
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skyworthy [2011-07-26 02:10:50 +0000 UTC]
Griffins and wolves great combination. and a great story to go with them.
Rise up Soar on
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HeartSprout [2011-03-24 06:52:46 +0000 UTC]
i cant get over how awesome this is. i'm writing a book about gryphons, and this small portion has tottaly made mine loose hope in my eyes. but great art!
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ElementalJess In reply to HeartSprout [2011-03-24 11:21:37 +0000 UTC]
Nooooooo don't lose hope O_O I feel that way every single time I read someone else's book. Just remember NOBODY can write the book you're going to write. You're a first-class you. Nobody has the same insight. Keep. Going.
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HeartSprout In reply to ElementalJess [2011-03-25 05:00:05 +0000 UTC]
bluhluhluh, i'm busy writing a play at the moment anyway, but i guess ill do it later
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ElementalJess In reply to HeartSprout [2011-03-25 11:20:40 +0000 UTC]
Ooooo a play. I toured for years with a theatre company (management, not acting..hence my nickname Good luck!
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HeartSprout In reply to ElementalJess [2011-03-25 23:26:36 +0000 UTC]
wow, i'm still aiming to be in theatre, but i think its a few years off
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serzero [2011-03-20 22:29:58 +0000 UTC]
The emotions in the painting tie together with the writing so well. Very nicely done, both of them.
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ElementalJess In reply to serzero [2011-03-21 10:08:07 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Much appreciated ^_^
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ChaosToGlory [2011-03-20 01:46:10 +0000 UTC]
Nice painting. The story was interesting; is there anymore or is this it?
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ElementalJess In reply to ChaosToGlory [2011-03-20 12:41:10 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!! Oh, there's a whole novel, currently undergoing revision. This is just a snippet to go with the scene. ^_^ Thanks for commenting
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ElementalJess In reply to LoD90 [2011-03-20 12:41:29 +0000 UTC]
Woo hoo! I mean...no, don't hyperventilate. But I'm so glad you like it
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Anavar [2011-03-18 21:26:58 +0000 UTC]
This. Is awesome. I particularly love the hints of a song at the end of the story, and the messy simplicity of the painting. Every time I try to paint like that the result looks horrible.
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ElementalJess In reply to Anavar [2011-03-19 01:23:11 +0000 UTC]
Aw thanks so much ^_^ I wish the messiness of it were purposeful But it's mostly laziness. I figure it works for a Forest though, eh? Eh? ^^
If you like that part of the song, you'll love the rest. But I'm Saving it. For that magical day when the WIP becomes a real book.
Thanks again for the kind comment
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