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Not quite satisfied with this, like the concept but i think i missing something,maybe u can help me....All done with brushes,but planets cortesy of [link]
C&C highly encouraged
Thanks
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Elemento11 In reply to ramirezhate [2008-05-21 18:32:08 +0000 UTC]
Glad u like i believe u have the same brushes, they are great!
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grimfairyreaper [2008-04-09 11:00:38 +0000 UTC]
A touch more light from the planets dont forget theyre showing due to the sun and make more of a contrast between th top and the bottom its too much of the same colour through out I think it needs more variation. The ribbon is too light it needs more deffinition it stands out too much considering the light.
This is a beautiful picture so I must fave but it would be great to see what else you can do with this idea. I would put a person just viasble in the fore ground but thats me!
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Elemento11 In reply to grimfairyreaper [2008-04-09 19:49:37 +0000 UTC]
totaly agree whit you, its all about lighting ill get it right someday....I aprecciate your feed back, very much....thanks for taking the time to write....
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grimfairyreaper In reply to Elemento11 [2008-04-10 21:30:36 +0000 UTC]
my pleasure its really such a lovely concept
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Elemento11 In reply to grimfairyreaper [2008-04-11 00:55:15 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much i will improve it, thanks for the add also.....
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marthig [2008-04-02 19:10:23 +0000 UTC]
As Janne commented I agree about the size of the planets, in my opinion they are too alike in size.
Also the idea of "Wind" seems to be given only by the red gauzy cloth being blown away.
Nevertheless it's a beautiful image :congrats:
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Elemento11 In reply to marthig [2008-04-02 23:48:10 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for input marthig.....ill will work the alnets
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marthig In reply to Elemento11 [2008-04-03 00:36:54 +0000 UTC]
You are welcome Raul
Take care
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InStunnedAwe [2008-04-02 11:27:12 +0000 UTC]
Lovely picture. You're asking for some feedback.
My first reaction when I saw the fullsize was that
the two planets were too close in size. Matter of
taste, of course. But I think that the farther planet
should be smaller and that the light-shadow line
of both should be identically in "percentage of the
surface".. And if you want to have a different
"percentage" it should be the farther planet who
should have most "light"... if you can follow my
ramblings.
Just my idea.. I know nothing about manips.
/J
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Elemento11 In reply to InStunnedAwe [2008-04-02 23:49:38 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much, for taking the time to give your input it makes a lot of sense,and all was done with brishes, no pics this time.....
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InStunnedAwe In reply to Elemento11 [2008-04-03 08:29:14 +0000 UTC]
You are very welcome. I really love the "planets in the sky" concept.
And I haven't got the slightest idea what "brushes" is in the sence used in
manip-progs. Keep up the great work.
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jusuart [2008-04-02 08:46:16 +0000 UTC]
Yeah Raul, great work, i really like the mood of it
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Akajork [2008-04-02 08:00:42 +0000 UTC]
altough you are not quite happy with it I think its one of your most realistic results.. I really like the mist in this piece.
You could blend in the planets a bit more.. that 2nd one has some weird lines crossing it and a bit of a weird color.. also that shawl adds a nice conceptual feel to it but it isnt done very well.. it is too bright to blend in realistic.
I really like this pic the only thing that really need change in my opinion are the planet textures.. talk to you about it on msn!
good work man! you keep improving!
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Elemento11 In reply to Akajork [2008-04-02 23:50:55 +0000 UTC]
Thanks jorik, look forward to hear your "how"
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Crashdown55 [2008-04-01 22:44:30 +0000 UTC]
too many elements, ditch the planets, they look unatural in the nice and lively night... just my 5 cents.
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Elemento11 In reply to Crashdown55 [2008-04-02 04:17:26 +0000 UTC]
Thank you crashdown,what you mean with ditch?
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