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You screamed your older sister's name. You got cut off by the crash. That was the last thing you ever remembered from that incident before everything went black. When you opened your eyes, you were in the hospital with dried blood on your legs. You were on a hospital bed with wheels currently being moved by a nurse who looked worried but gave you a smile to tell you everything was fine. You had a special see-through mask over your mouth and nose called a nebulizer connected to some tubes and you had stitches on your arms, legs, and some on your face. Your voices was broken and weak, and you couldn't talk anymore. You closed your eyes again, going into a deep sleep. Of course, this was months ago and now you were an orphan that was always wondering the world. You always went into the woods to play with the birds and animals but one day you found this mansion inside the forest one day, and wondered in.
"Hello?" you called. You saw a person pass by that had a a tan jacket, jeans, and a mask. "Hey!" you called, not having a care who it was. You being the regular fun and optimistic 5 year old not having a care really, you called out to the strange person. He looked at you and dropped his clipboard he was carrying. You couldn't see it, but his face was full of surprise under his mask. He didn't expect a 5 year old child with brown, wavy, hair and green eyes His hands were trembling and he called to his brother, Hoody, quietly. "U-Um, Hoody? Be a dear and come here p-please." He said, stuttering. Hoody, his brother, came out and said "What?" before he saw you. "What do you want-" he saw you and gasped. "G-Get E.J!" Hoody mumbled to Masky. You were in confusion from what was going on. You tilted your head at Hoody. "Hi!" you said, enthusiastically. You smiled at him widely and he kind of smiled a bit under his mask. "Why are you wearing that? Why was that other man wearing a mask? Do you 2 only live here?" you asked enthusiastically and curious with a wide smile. Hoodie looked surprised under his mask and hoody. "Um.. he said. Hoody changed the subject. "So.. what are you doing here?" You looked at him and smiled. "Oh. Yeah, I'm an orphan and I wonder around these woods all the time. I think I went too deep this time!" you chuckled. Hoody smiled under his mask, a happy and warm smile. Suddenly, Jeff and BEN came down. Your eyes widened. You ran to them and of course, starting to ask questions. "Why are you white? Why is your mouth cut into a smile? That's cool! Why are your eyelids gone? *gasp*
Did you-?! Did you spill red juice on your hoody? I like red juice! Do you? Your hair is long! I'm ______! What's your name?" you finished with a huge smile. He and BEN chuckled. You turned to BEN. "Your hat is cool! Why are your eyes red? Why are you floating? I wanna float too! That's cool! What's your name?" He was about to say something. "I'm _____!" you say. You smiled at both at them. They looked at each other and burst out chuckling. "I'm Jeff and this is BEN." Jeff says as he points to BEN. Suddenly, a husky with a smile came in the living room. You ran over to him.
"Hi!" you say to the dog. You looked at his collar. "Smile!" you burst out as you see his name tag. You saw Jack and Masky come down the stairs. You obviously rushed to him. "Why do you have a blue mask? Why is there black stuff coming out of your eyes? That's creepy! I'm ______! Are you.. Jack!?" you said, as you read his name printed in blue on his jacket. He chuckled. "She's a fun one." he laughed. "Yes, my name is Jack." he said to you. Suddenly, you heard a voice. "Guys?" it said. You tried to run over to the voice but E.J, Masky, Hoody, BEN, and Jeff grabbed your hand and put you behind them. They took out their phones and pretended to do stuff casually.
"Guys, I heard a 5 year old girl in here, is everything alright?" a 10 foot man said, who had no face but he was paper white and had a business suit on. He had a deep but soothing and calm voice at the same time. "Everything is fine." Masky said, not looking up from his phone. "You're just hearing things because you're so old." Jeff said, making him and BEN laughed. It made even made Jack to snicker a little bit.
"Y'know, guys, I can see right over you." Slenderman chuckled. They sighed and hung their heads as they moved over for you. You ran over to him and had your usual outburst and questions. You smiled at him. You had to look up to see his face.. well
just head with NO face but whatever. "You're tall! And you're paper white! Where's your face? How did you get this tall? I am up to your leg.. well knee!" you laughed.
It made him chuckle a bit, too and he would have smiled if he could. It made even the CreepyPastas to smile. Even Jeff's eternal smile widened a bit.
"Well, I think your fun, _____. I'm Slenderman. I am aware that I'm tall," he chuckled. "I'm 10 feet." you gasped. "That probably breaks the world record, Slenderman!! I think you're cool! I met the other.. people.. earlier! I don't think I met the other little girl like me that I saw earlier, though.. They are all really nice, though. So are you! I am an orphan and my name is _____. I wandered here since I go to the woods everyday. I told Hoody that I went too far!" you laughed. Everyone's face darkened a bit.
"B-but where do you sleep?" they asked. You shrugged. "Wherever I can find. Hey! I never got everyone's name! I believe it was just the other masked one with the tan jacket I ran into first." You changed the subject without realizing it, because, well, you're only 5 years old. "Oh!" Masky said. "Sorry! I'm Masky." he chuckled. You nodded and smiled at everyone. "Child." you heard Slenderman say. You looked up at him. The next Slenderman asked is what everyone was dying to ask.
"How about you move in?"
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LunarTheNightFury [2023-03-02 20:55:02 +0000 UTC]
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C3po83 [2021-04-02 03:10:19 +0000 UTC]
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SnapePotions34 [2020-04-02 05:40:02 +0000 UTC]
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IHeartSlendermanandJ [2019-04-18 23:15:17 +0000 UTC]
MORE MORE MORE my real name is Audrey I am a orphan and took in by Creepypasta Since my dad Hades and mom and brother and sister dead I have nothing to lose
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C3po83 In reply to IHeartSlendermanandJ [2021-04-02 03:10:40 +0000 UTC]
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Animation-baeTM [2017-06-25 04:03:08 +0000 UTC]
I have an afro tho and my eyes are brownish blackish..... And im shy not to mention.
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pinktea31 In reply to Animation-baeTM [2017-07-08 03:12:17 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I made this when I was around 14. My writing skills were pretty subpar and I was new to this. I made a part two, if you want to read it. I made it more neutral.
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austinpopdan [2017-04-06 11:31:10 +0000 UTC]
Hoodie and Masky aren't brothers, proxies or creepypasta characters. Actually do some research before you write about them, please.
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pinktea31 In reply to austinpopdan [2017-06-18 22:00:19 +0000 UTC]
Well, I was 14 when I wrote this so my writing skills were pretty subpar. I made a part two, if you're still interested.
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xXLunar-KittyXx In reply to austinpopdan [2017-06-07 01:57:56 +0000 UTC]
They're not brother son but their really close and think of each other as brothers. Just sayin.
EDIT: brother son? Fricken iPad auto correct...
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PattyFire [2017-04-01 04:20:11 +0000 UTC]
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
im not risking it.
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Zelminer [2017-01-15 23:09:28 +0000 UTC]
ElectricSpark, plz reply. Will there be a part two to this? I really liked it and it's one of the best fan fics I've ever read
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mackmack2424 [2016-07-18 14:40:20 +0000 UTC]
Do you stalk me??? How do you know when I was little I had brown wavy hair and green eyes???
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KittigiaSempai [2016-06-27 01:57:14 +0000 UTC]
"How about you move in?"
Me: I VOLUNTEER! I VOLUNTEER AS TRIBUTE!! *makes sign* I WILL MOVE IN!
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Lulana13 In reply to KittigiaSempai [2017-01-24 04:27:23 +0000 UTC]
im reading the hunger games lol
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Charleen747 [2016-06-08 15:12:01 +0000 UTC]
OMG my eyes are green and my hair is wavy too Ekkkkkk😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😂
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LisanaThePuppet [2016-03-19 23:21:36 +0000 UTC]
I'm Just Imagining A 5 Year Old Talking Fast While Asking Questions XD
Like:
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RosieforevzAJ [2015-11-17 20:11:29 +0000 UTC]
Even thou im not 5, i talk as much and ask as much as that kid XD
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pinktea31 [2015-10-25 05:09:39 +0000 UTC]
PART 2 IS NOW OUT! Hope you enjoy. pinktea31.deviantart.com/art/C…
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pinktea31 [2015-10-25 03:47:43 +0000 UTC]
PLEASE READ!
I am eletric {incorrect spelling, 2014 me wasn't the brightest haha} if you need more proof, let me know. This account is now inactive due to me losing my password. I am currently writing part 2. Thank you so, so much..it's hard to believe how many views my story has.
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pinktea31 [2015-10-25 03:39:09 +0000 UTC]
Hello! I am eletric {I spelled it wrong! I know. My 2014 self was not the brightest tbh} if you need proof, let me know, but I had lost the password for eletric and completely forgot about it for a year. Excuse my cringe-y writing, that wasn't the point of the story but I was quite the bad writer then. I'm writing a chapter 2 currently so this one will be more neutral so it fits the reader. thank you for all of your kind comments {a few making me laugh}. And this has 21,589 views..I'm currently crying haha. Thank you so much for reading!
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pinktea31 In reply to DarkBone245 [2015-10-25 03:37:06 +0000 UTC]
Excuse my cringe-y writing, that wasn't the point of the story but I was a really, really bad writer then. I'm writing a chapter 2 currently so this one will be more neutral so it fits the reader.
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Katt-the-Dragon In reply to DarkBone245 [2015-10-01 18:47:58 +0000 UTC]
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someoneethingssssss [2015-08-14 19:01:16 +0000 UTC]
SO CUTE! Please continue! I love the kind of stories with the child reader is so curious.
BY THE WAY,
I have an outfit that you might want to use for the child reader! Link: www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=17…
Btw: It's panda themed...
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pinktea31 In reply to someoneethingssssss [2015-10-25 05:09:47 +0000 UTC]
PART 2 IS NOW OUT! Hope you enjoy. pinktea31.deviantart.com/art/C…
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pinktea31 In reply to someoneethingssssss [2015-10-25 03:41:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm eletric {spelled it wrong! oops..damn the 2014 me haha}, by the way. If you need proof, let me know, but I have lost the password for eletric so I have started again a month or so ago. Thank you for the outfit, I'll consider using it! (:
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pinktea31 In reply to GirlvsMonster [2015-10-25 03:35:35 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! I am electric spark, by the way, if you need proof let me know but I lost the password to my original {eletric spark} and just started a few months ago or so. Thank you again! (:
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Fanfic-Maker [2015-07-21 04:40:32 +0000 UTC]
Damn that's cute as fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck
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pinktea31 In reply to Fanfic-Maker [2015-10-25 03:36:00 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! Sorry for the late reply. I am electric spark, by the way, if you need proof let me know but I lost the password to my original {eletric spark} and just started a few months ago or so. Thank you again! (:
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dawnfangs-art [2015-05-18 00:09:10 +0000 UTC]
This story is cool I wonder how it end keep up the great work
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pinktea31 In reply to dawnfangs-art [2015-07-02 06:34:53 +0000 UTC]
I'm electric spark. If you need proof, let me know but indeed it's me. I am SO sorry for not responding, for indeed I had lost my password for both DeviantArt and my email, is now sadly inactive. Yes, there will be a part two and hopefully you're not inactive by now. thanks much for reading!!
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