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Published: 2006-08-16 22:08:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 110; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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Description sunny dewdrops hang in the air,
a thousand bored offspring of
   ephemeral nights
they settle on your fingertips
strong and milky, touching my lips
                “goodbye”

i am floating on royal air,
exhaling stars  and the yoyo moon;
powdered milky way
dusting my cheeks
    two best friends quietly walk through the dark
past trumpet vines that crawl
to the top of summer’s backbone
dropping their flowers in an orange pile
   on the dirt

tonight we chase the waning moon--
shes got us in her web,
but she just keeps running
   (as long as this song keeps playing we will never give up)
still, i can’t ignore
the night’s insistence on
“goodbye”
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Comments: 6

quantumbutterfly [2006-08-23 02:18:47 +0000 UTC]

You really don't get enough attention on dA. This is... I'm not sure how to describe it, other than that it's beautiful.

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elevatorlady In reply to quantumbutterfly [2006-08-25 05:40:22 +0000 UTC]

aw, thank you so much tell all your friends haha, recognition would be sweet

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quantumbutterfly In reply to elevatorlady [2006-08-25 14:38:36 +0000 UTC]

"Featured you" in my journal... that would probably mean more if anyone read it, but it's the thought that counts, right?

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elevatorlady In reply to quantumbutterfly [2006-08-25 17:21:28 +0000 UTC]

aw really? thank you so much haha, im sure more people read it than would read mine anyway

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quantumbutterfly In reply to elevatorlady [2006-08-25 18:28:56 +0000 UTC]

Considering that (at the moment, anyway) you don't actually have one as such, that's probably true.

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elevatorlady In reply to quantumbutterfly [2006-08-25 21:28:55 +0000 UTC]

hahaha a very valid point

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