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Published: 2007-04-13 02:22:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 94; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Revolutions.All things turn,
It matters not the reason why.
The Moon turns 'round the Earth
And The Earth turns 'round the sun
And so lives turn 'round each other
Never knowing where it will end.
There you stand before me, without a word
Yet I can hear the tear of your heart.
I didn't know, or understand why,
But I was drawn to you, unbound
I could only heed your heart's cry.
Eye to eye, and face to face we stand
No words spoken, not event the exchange of names
Silence hoves in the air
Between us... such things have no meaning
What brought us to this place?
Could it be....
You were there all the time?
We stand there locked in our gaze.
Is it confusion that has binds our tongues?
Perhaps its fear that controls our actions
or maybe we're unwilling to try?
The world falls away,
soon all that remains is You and I...
And this place.
Just us, your heart beating, connecting with mine
There, I see it in your eyes,
The dance of flame, that reflects my own
So tragic, so beautiful; like the mornful sond you sing
My own heart begins wo weep
Come to me, and nevermore be alone.
Press your head to my heart, that we may be strong, as one.
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Comments: 7
Cogidubnus [2007-04-14 05:41:08 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful, good sir. The third to last stanza especially jumps out at me.
The whole thing exudes tenderness, and it really is truly a moving piece. Very, very nice.
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eliander In reply to Cogidubnus [2007-04-14 06:10:04 +0000 UTC]
thank you but as i said that was the result of a group effort. it's my friends final take on one of my peoms in progress.
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STRusty [2007-04-13 12:06:48 +0000 UTC]
*wipes a tear from his eye*
thats soo *sniff* beautiful
deep, very deep
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eliander In reply to KuroInuSama69 [2007-04-13 04:19:33 +0000 UTC]
it's true and i plan to show them all what you started with once both the picture and my poem are ready for display
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KuroInuSama69 In reply to eliander [2007-04-13 04:51:11 +0000 UTC]
lol you did a good job lol i only put a shine on it lol
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